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Array ( [sid] => 11669 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Farm Boys [time] => 2003-01-30 23:11:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Farm boys give
And farm boys take
But what kind of men
Do farm boys make?

They get their kicks
By plowing dirt
Laughin' drinkin'
They just flirt

They trick you
Into thinkin' they care
Of course you fall
Cuz farm ethnics are rare

They play in field
And play with your heart
Never try to break a farm boy
Not if you're smart

You'll only be confused
When he calls you Dear
Its not you he refers to
Its his precious JOHN DEERE

Of course not all
Can be written into this lot
For some are TRUE
But most are NOT

How do you compete
With tractors and farm toys?
Look for farm MEN
Stop playing with BOYS!!!!

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 7 [informant] => Jilly [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

Farm Boys

Contributed by Jilly on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 11:11:19 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

Farm boys give
And farm boys take
But what kind of men
Do farm boys make?

They get their kicks
By plowing dirt
Laughin' drinkin'
They just flirt

They trick you
Into thinkin' they care
Of course you fall
Cuz farm ethnics are rare

They play in field
And play with your heart
Never try to break a farm boy
Not if you're smart

You'll only be confused
When he calls you Dear
Its not you he refers to
Its his precious JOHN DEERE

Of course not all
Can be written into this lot
For some are TRUE
But most are NOT

How do you compete
With tractors and farm toys?
Look for farm MEN
Stop playing with BOYS!!!!

Copyright © Jilly ... [ 2003-01-30 23:11:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Farm Boys (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 10:38:47 PM AEST
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Lol!!!! very funny! great write!

mckayla

Re: Farm Boys (User Rating: 1 )
by unpredictable on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 11:50:02 PM AEST
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great poem. . .I like it much

Re: Farm Boys (User Rating: 1 )
by Backblade on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 02:04:08 AM AEST
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Jilly

I thought this poem was an interesting, funny read!

I like the quickness of the stanzas...perhaps indicating the quick love a farmboy brings? the length of the relationship?

I do, though, think that if you ever do revise this poem....perhaps the last stanza. The last 2 lines, i think, break from the rythm of the poem as a whole and seemed a bit forced. But that's just my two cents.

It was great and I hope to read more of your humorous poems!!

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