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Array ( [sid] => 116653 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Breathing's just another way to let go of something you need [time] => 2006-03-18 19:49:22 [hometext] => This was written about my first and only love, we broke up a month ago, it's actually a song. tee hee. [bodytext] => Each String You Pull

Pulls me closer to the edge

In a time where my heart can’t take much time

You have the power to end it all.

I am so tired

Just so tired

Of this darkness that I’m forced to see

You’re the guy that’ll take my throne

As the reigning queen of me

This life of mine is in your hands

Pull me closer, or Push me off the edge

Breathing’s just another way

To let go of what you need

You’ve stopped these lungs

With your frozen heart

And im suffocating with thoughts of you

You’re my angel

You’re my hell

You’re my saviour in disguise

You’re the leader of this masquerade

And the best song in this ballroom is

I’m so in love with you

Can you feel my sad heart beating

As it races against yours

A rhythm in this chaos

And the maddening of our souls

Every time I look in your eyes

I see a bit of my soul

That you’ve collected oh so gently

As this shatter-proof soul crumbles

Into what you want it to be

Your voice is my muse

Leading me to the rocks

That I’ll bleed upon to please you

Im trapped in this net you’ve woven

And im letting myself go

I just want you to know

Breathing’s just another way

To let go of what you need

You’ve stopped these lungs

With your frozen heart

And im suffocating with thoughts of you

You’re my angel

You’re my hell

You’re my saviour in disguise

You’re the leader of this masquerade

And the best song in this ballroom is

I’m so in love with you

So take this heart and break it

I promise I can’t take it

I love to see your sickening smile

So smile pretty baby

I’ll die for awhile.

This song was meant to be happy

Don’t you remember when

You promised life would be easier

Than when this all began?

Well now I’ve fallen so hard

I will never try to get up

So crush me with your two ton words

I’ll lie there as you please

The longer, the better

Im down here on my knees

Pledging allegiance to these thoughts of you

And what I always let you do

Breathing’s just another way

To let go of what you need

You’ve stopped these lungs

With your frozen heart

And im suffocating with thoughts of you

You’re my angel

You’re my hell

You’re my saviour in disguise

You’re the leader of this masquerade

And the best song in this ballroom is

I’m so in love with you

So take this heart and break it

I promise I can’t take it

I love to see your sickening smile

So smile pretty baby

I’ll die for awhile.

I’ve been so strong

For far to long

Im ready to let go

Save yourself, forget the rest

And leave me in this snow

Created by the silence you left here in my soul

A hundred years from now

They’ll sing our pathetic story

Romeo and Juliet

In a modern day tragedy

A Perfect Catastrophe

In this withered romance

Of A Girl so in love

She sells her soul

To this boy she knows

Will just sell it again

For the pleasure he gains

For watching her suffer slowly

With each drop of blood

His smile will grow

She’s doing this for me

He says as he never blinks an eye

And watches slowly

As the love he loved

Slowly, slowly, dies

Breathing’s just another way

To let go of what you need

You’ve stopped these lungs

With your frozen heart

And im suffocating with thoughts of you

You’re my angel

You’re my hell

You’re my saviour in disguise

You’re the leader of this masquerade

And the best song in this ballroom is

I’m so in love with you

So take this heart and break it

I promise I can’t take it

I love to see your sickening smile

So smile pretty baby

I’ll die for awhile.

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Breathing's just another way to let go of something you need

Contributed by DawnOfDecember on Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 07:49:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Each String You Pull

Pulls me closer to the edge

In a time where my heart can’t take much time

You have the power to end it all.

I am so tired

Just so tired

Of this darkness that I’m forced to see

You’re the guy that’ll take my throne

As the reigning queen of me

This life of mine is in your hands

Pull me closer, or Push me off the edge

Breathing’s just another way

To let go of what you need

You’ve stopped these lungs

With your frozen heart

And im suffocating with thoughts of you

You’re my angel

You’re my hell

You’re my saviour in disguise

You’re the leader of this masquerade

And the best song in this ballroom is

I’m so in love with you

Can you feel my sad heart beating

As it races against yours

A rhythm in this chaos

And the maddening of our souls

Every time I look in your eyes

I see a bit of my soul

That you’ve collected oh so gently

As this shatter-proof soul crumbles

Into what you want it to be

Your voice is my muse

Leading me to the rocks

That I’ll bleed upon to please you

Im trapped in this net you’ve woven

And im letting myself go

I just want you to know

Breathing’s just another way

To let go of what you need

You’ve stopped these lungs

With your frozen heart

And im suffocating with thoughts of you

You’re my angel

You’re my hell

You’re my saviour in disguise

You’re the leader of this masquerade

And the best song in this ballroom is

I’m so in love with you

So take this heart and break it

I promise I can’t take it

I love to see your sickening smile

So smile pretty baby

I’ll die for awhile.

This song was meant to be happy

Don’t you remember when

You promised life would be easier

Than when this all began?

Well now I’ve fallen so hard

I will never try to get up

So crush me with your two ton words

I’ll lie there as you please

The longer, the better

Im down here on my knees

Pledging allegiance to these thoughts of you

And what I always let you do

Breathing’s just another way

To let go of what you need

You’ve stopped these lungs

With your frozen heart

And im suffocating with thoughts of you

You’re my angel

You’re my hell

You’re my saviour in disguise

You’re the leader of this masquerade

And the best song in this ballroom is

I’m so in love with you

So take this heart and break it

I promise I can’t take it

I love to see your sickening smile

So smile pretty baby

I’ll die for awhile.

I’ve been so strong

For far to long

Im ready to let go

Save yourself, forget the rest

And leave me in this snow

Created by the silence you left here in my soul

A hundred years from now

They’ll sing our pathetic story

Romeo and Juliet

In a modern day tragedy

A Perfect Catastrophe

In this withered romance

Of A Girl so in love

She sells her soul

To this boy she knows

Will just sell it again

For the pleasure he gains

For watching her suffer slowly

With each drop of blood

His smile will grow

She’s doing this for me

He says as he never blinks an eye

And watches slowly

As the love he loved

Slowly, slowly, dies

Breathing’s just another way

To let go of what you need

You’ve stopped these lungs

With your frozen heart

And im suffocating with thoughts of you

You’re my angel

You’re my hell

You’re my saviour in disguise

You’re the leader of this masquerade

And the best song in this ballroom is

I’m so in love with you

So take this heart and break it

I promise I can’t take it

I love to see your sickening smile

So smile pretty baby

I’ll die for awhile.





Copyright © DawnOfDecember ... [ 2006-03-18 19:49:22]
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