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It's Such a Beautiful Place.
Contributed by
moses
on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 05:34:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The sun is setting, the night is majestic.
I can finally feel the wind on my face.
Now only the light can shine on you.
It's such a beautiful place.
My walls crumble to the ground.
I've lost the numbness to it all.
Freeness from conformity, I've found.
We speak to eachother so eloquently.
I hold you gently into the night.
It's such a beautiful place.
There's no need for haste.
We have all the time we could ever want.
I've stripped myself of living in a daze,
looking into your eyes I gaze,
healing my deepest wounds.
It's such a beautiful place.
I can't hide from your eyes.
We drive into the majestic hot summer night.
Unsettling the cooling desert sand,
I grab your hand and hold it tight.
It's such a beautiful place.
I can forget everything I've been taught before.
No more we need wish for,
other than the comfort of simplicity into our old age.
God's generosity shows itself in your radiance.
Now I can finally feel the wind on my face,
Oh, It's such a beautiful place.
Copyright ©
moses
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2006-03-18 17:34:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: It's Such a Beautiful Place.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mild_Tempest on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 07:58:09 PM AEST (User
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Interesting descriptions. A wonderful place to be. I liked the format of the poem. Thanks a creative person to pull away from the old-used formats. |
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Re: It's Such a Beautiful Place.
(User Rating: 1 ) by lindy70 on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 06:15:22 AM AEST (User
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great read .
its sounds a place we all would like to be |
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Re: It's Such a Beautiful Place.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 01:59:23 PM AEST (User
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A beautiful place a beautiful poem, well done.
J |
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Re: It's Such a Beautiful Place.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 06:41:40 PM AEST (User
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~*Moses*~
An outstanding and beautifully penned piece of poetry that captivates the reader from beginning to end. Your great poetic verses don't get enough recognition my dear friend. I am a real fan of ur awesome work ~*Moses*~ Thank you for sharing your beautiful true work of art with us. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
*love n hugs*
~*sue*~ |
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Re: It's Such a Beautiful Place.
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 05:58:49 AM AEST (User
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Such a beautifully, romantic write that will put any reader in the mood for your beautifull place.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: It's Such a Beautiful Place.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ruby2sdy on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 05:00:03 PM AEST (User
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so visual, such lovely imagery! I really enjoyed this piece, very nice,
2sdyx |
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