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Array ( [sid] => 116557 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Last Poem [time] => 2006-03-17 05:38:22 [hometext] => Depression comes and goes, but in the end, all it does is kill. [bodytext] => The Last Poem

My blood feels as if it's completely engulfed in flames,
I need to escape this pain,
The only way I can think of how to avoid this suffering,
Is by thrusting a knife through my vein.

Please mother don't cry when you get the call,
Hearing the words of me in critical condition,
I know mother I told you I'd give my all,
But sadly this will be my last rendition.

Is there a way to escape without me having to die?
Is there really a place where my soul will be sound?
I could run but that would make me the centre of the public eye,
And there is also the problem of being found.

So mother what can I do to escape this pain?
I guess I'm gonna have to resort to using this knife.
Mother don't cry, you aren't the one to blame,
Goodbye mother, it's finally time to end my life.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 262 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Astralbermudian [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

The Last Poem

Contributed by Astralbermudian on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 05:38:22 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The Last Poem

My blood feels as if it's completely engulfed in flames,
I need to escape this pain,
The only way I can think of how to avoid this suffering,
Is by thrusting a knife through my vein.

Please mother don't cry when you get the call,
Hearing the words of me in critical condition,
I know mother I told you I'd give my all,
But sadly this will be my last rendition.

Is there a way to escape without me having to die?
Is there really a place where my soul will be sound?
I could run but that would make me the centre of the public eye,
And there is also the problem of being found.

So mother what can I do to escape this pain?
I guess I'm gonna have to resort to using this knife.
Mother don't cry, you aren't the one to blame,
Goodbye mother, it's finally time to end my life.

Copyright © Astralbermudian ... [ 2006-03-17 05:38:22]
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Re: The Last Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 01:56:29 PM AEST
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I know how you feel. I sometimes feel the same way. Hope you get past that feeling. Good write. Keep writing b/c it does help to get those emotions out. Great write

Re: The Last Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by weeme on Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 08:09:52 AM AEST
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hey i no how u feel i feel like that alot but hey if i can still stand strong u can also do it keep writing it is good to express ur self espically through words in poems good write

sure check mine out some time xxx good luck

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