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Array ( [sid] => 116546 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows [time] => 2006-03-16 22:37:23 [hometext] => A moment where words failed me. It is the last line that it leads to. I was hoping to capture the point despite the failure of words. [bodytext] => The sun set ...
like that man wrote.
The sky was ...
like that woman wrote.
Words describe,
prescribe,
illustrate,
illuminate,
words that glorify,
demonize,
patronize,
canonize
in a plastic reality.
Changing,
alternating,
evolving,
regressing,
still was,
still differently the same.

Sometimes the point is lost
in the artwork.
The sun set and night came.
You are beautiful even in the reflections
of our windows. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 275 [topic] => 43 [informant] => eggflipper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows

Contributed by eggflipper on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The sun set ...
like that man wrote.
The sky was ...
like that woman wrote.
Words describe,
prescribe,
illustrate,
illuminate,
words that glorify,
demonize,
patronize,
canonize
in a plastic reality.
Changing,
alternating,
evolving,
regressing,
still was,
still differently the same.

Sometimes the point is lost
in the artwork.
The sun set and night came.
You are beautiful even in the reflections
of our windows.

Copyright © eggflipper ... [ 2006-03-16 22:37:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by Jane_Doe on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:46:41 PM AEST
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I really liked this a lot. Your words were so emotional and so lovely and the feelings expressed are so real. Great write.

Re: You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 11:57:21 PM AEST
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its deep. great write!

Re: You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 05:28:44 AM AEST
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I am always moved by your writes, this is no different.

Re: You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 09:36:32 AM AEST
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you always write with great intensity making one think. your creative side is fresh and exciting.
Michelle

Re: You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 11:09:39 AM AEST
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You have captured the point very well.... Love your style......
Jenni

Re: You Are Beautiful in the Reflections of our Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by whiteleo1984 on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 05:26:43 PM AEST
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i liked it

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