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Array ( [sid] => 116516 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Closer to Me [time] => 2006-03-16 16:05:57 [hometext] => I love this poem! It's amazing, at least, I think so. Tell me how you feel.... [bodytext] => Image hosting by Photobucket

Bring you closer
Bring you closer
Change your skin
Rip it open
Bring you closer
Bring you closer
The only truth
Within
Bring you closer
Bring you closer
You’re no closer
Than you were when you began
Bring you close
Bring you closer
You hear me whisper it…
Bring you closer
Bring you closer
To no truth
But to the darkness
Can you feel me?
Can you feel me?
Can you feel me?
Within?
I’m here…
Right here
Listen closely
I won’t say it again.

We are the dark! We are this world! Can you feel life pulse within? What does it feel like? That red beating inside your skin….it’s getting closer…and closer…the clock stops ticking within. You can feel, I can feel it…live falling away within. You are the light! Create the darkness! Don’t fear it…never fear it….it’s yours, now take it!

I whisper…
Bring you closer
Bring you closer
To the truth
That truth
Within
Bring you closer
Bring you closer
I am closer
Can you feel me?
Within?
Closer
And closer
And closer
It comes
Closer
And closer
To no end
It’s just begun
Closer
And closer
And closer
I am within
Listen now
I won’t say it again!

You are strong. You are right! Don’t run from this fight! Darkness brewing under the surface of my skin that you kiss. It comes creeping; now creeping, into your dreams! Don’t be scared, I’m right here! Take up this fight with me. Can you feel it? You can feel it…it lies between us weeping….you know its there. And you’re scared so now I must leave. Leave a whisper…I leave a whisper to guide you back to me…

So I
Bring you closer
Bring you closer
Always closer
To the truth
Within
Closer
And closer
And closer
We are
To it
I’ll
Bring you closer
And closer
And closer
To the flame
Let it burn you
Let it take you
It’s the only way
So come closer
Closer
And closer
To me
The truth is here
Right here
Straight inside of me!
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Closer to Me

Contributed by MG_Akela22090 on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 04:05:57 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



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Bring you closer
Bring you closer
Change your skin
Rip it open
Bring you closer
Bring you closer
The only truth
Within
Bring you closer
Bring you closer
You’re no closer
Than you were when you began
Bring you close
Bring you closer
You hear me whisper it…
Bring you closer
Bring you closer
To no truth
But to the darkness
Can you feel me?
Can you feel me?
Can you feel me?
Within?
I’m here…
Right here
Listen closely
I won’t say it again.

We are the dark! We are this world! Can you feel life pulse within? What does it feel like? That red beating inside your skin….it’s getting closer…and closer…the clock stops ticking within. You can feel, I can feel it…live falling away within. You are the light! Create the darkness! Don’t fear it…never fear it….it’s yours, now take it!

I whisper…
Bring you closer
Bring you closer
To the truth
That truth
Within
Bring you closer
Bring you closer
I am closer
Can you feel me?
Within?
Closer
And closer
And closer
It comes
Closer
And closer
To no end
It’s just begun
Closer
And closer
And closer
I am within
Listen now
I won’t say it again!

You are strong. You are right! Don’t run from this fight! Darkness brewing under the surface of my skin that you kiss. It comes creeping; now creeping, into your dreams! Don’t be scared, I’m right here! Take up this fight with me. Can you feel it? You can feel it…it lies between us weeping….you know its there. And you’re scared so now I must leave. Leave a whisper…I leave a whisper to guide you back to me…

So I
Bring you closer
Bring you closer
Always closer
To the truth
Within
Closer
And closer
And closer
We are
To it
I’ll
Bring you closer
And closer
And closer
To the flame
Let it burn you
Let it take you
It’s the only way
So come closer
Closer
And closer
To me
The truth is here
Right here
Straight inside of me!




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Re: Closer to Me (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 04:45:27 PM AEST
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Very different. I am always drawn to the darker writes, and it did not disappoint.


Re: Closer to Me (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos78 on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 05:18:49 PM AEST
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not bad




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