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Array ( [sid] => 116509 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WHAT HAPPEND [time] => 2006-03-16 13:25:24 [hometext] => I WROTE THIS THE DAY MY BESTFRIEND WENT AWAY [bodytext] => They took something from me that i never thought they would
they took my bestfriend and she might be gone for good

i told her im sorry for what happend
but she says im not the one to blame it was outta lust

we only did it one time while she was still wit him
now shes a cheater and it happend again

my heart and soul belongs to her forgood
now if only i could perpose i would

she calls herself my wifey
and i call myself her hubby

i love her with all my heart
but now our lives have turned so dark

her mother hates my ******* guts
but she don't understand her daughter is ******* up

she stole my heart and ran with the key
now shes mine forever so **** the world

now there lookin at me [comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Tiffyo4 [notes] => Edited for Language by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

WHAT HAPPEND

Contributed by Tiffyo4 on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 01:25:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

They took something from me that i never thought they would
they took my bestfriend and she might be gone for good

i told her im sorry for what happend
but she says im not the one to blame it was outta lust

we only did it one time while she was still wit him
now shes a cheater and it happend again

my heart and soul belongs to her forgood
now if only i could perpose i would

she calls herself my wifey
and i call myself her hubby

i love her with all my heart
but now our lives have turned so dark

her mother hates my ******* guts
but she don't understand her daughter is ******* up

she stole my heart and ran with the key
now shes mine forever so **** the world

now there lookin at me

Copyright © Tiffyo4 ... [ 2006-03-16 13:25:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: WHAT HAPPEND (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos78 on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 01:31:09 PM AEST
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not bad

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