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Would your world
Cease to turn
Would you notice
Or would life go on
As if I never
Existed at all
If I loved you
Would you take
Me back again
Or would you turn
Your back on me
Pretend not to notice
If I showed up
Crying at your door
Would you welcome
Me with open arms
Or would you
Never forget all the
Pain I caused.
Would you be able
To start again
Or would you
Leave me
Dying inside
Like I did
Once to you [comments] => 7 [counter] => 334 [topic] => 22 [informant] => DarkFaerie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Would you?

Contributed by DarkFaerie on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 07:43:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

If I died tomorrow
Would your world
Cease to turn
Would you notice
Or would life go on
As if I never
Existed at all
If I loved you
Would you take
Me back again
Or would you turn
Your back on me
Pretend not to notice
If I showed up
Crying at your door
Would you welcome
Me with open arms
Or would you
Never forget all the
Pain I caused.
Would you be able
To start again
Or would you
Leave me
Dying inside
Like I did
Once to you

Copyright © DarkFaerie ... [ 2006-03-15 19:43:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Would you? (User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 07:53:49 PM AEST
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Wonderfully captured heartache. We all die a bit when love is denied.

Re: Would you? (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 07:56:55 PM AEST
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Very powerful, and sorrowful.

Re: Would you? (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 08:04:00 PM AEST
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awesome write! this has so much emotion and longing wrapped up in it. I'm sure that special someone will ALWAYS love you no matter what.... A++++

I understand why you did it...

Re: Would you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 09:44:49 PM AEST
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A peice of poetry that trancends reality, a question reflecting hope and hopelessness at the same time. you have a nice style, delicate even when in turmoil of the heart. a lovely and sad write at the same time.

Ben

Re: Would you? (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 10:22:19 PM AEST
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Very nice piece! it's good to see some fine
wordplay and brutally honest material

Would you be able
To start again
Or would you
Leave me
Dying inside
Like I did
Once to you

very good, i love it
keep it up!!!!

dw

Re: Would you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 12:35:44 AM AEST
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Odd how feelings can change...isn't it...or do they?
Great outpouring, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Re: Would you? (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 06:11:16 PM AEST
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"If I showed up
Crying at your door
Would you welcome
Me with open arms
Or would you
Never forget all the
Pain I caused.
Would you be able
To start again....?"- I'd always welcome you back! the door never closed... you just have to take that "first" step... so that we can start again....

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