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Array ( [sid] => 116448 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Wake Dream [time] => 2006-03-15 08:48:56 [hometext] => i used to have lucid dreams all the time, this piece of work is an example of these. [bodytext] => I'm listening to the silence
It's swallowing up the room
Pitch black, I see me laying here
Within a quilted tomb.

The silence so heavy, heard so loud
Starts ringing in my ears
Builds up to a crescendo
Starts reducing me to tears.

My thoughts begin to wander
Try to think of pleasent things
Just as I'm drifting under
The dawn chorus the begins.

So, there has passed another night
Without a wink of sleep
Or is it my recurring dream
At which myself I peep?.

Beth Wood
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A Wake Dream

Contributed by bethwood on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 08:48:56 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I'm listening to the silence
It's swallowing up the room
Pitch black, I see me laying here
Within a quilted tomb.

The silence so heavy, heard so loud
Starts ringing in my ears
Builds up to a crescendo
Starts reducing me to tears.

My thoughts begin to wander
Try to think of pleasent things
Just as I'm drifting under
The dawn chorus the begins.

So, there has passed another night
Without a wink of sleep
Or is it my recurring dream
At which myself I peep?.

Beth Wood
March '06.

Copyright © bethwood ... [ 2006-03-15 08:48:56]
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Re: A Wake Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 08:55:02 AM AEST
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you are compounding all your lucid dream
experiences into one experience and
at the end we are left feeling relieved?

Re: A Wake Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by bethwood on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 08:58:19 AM AEST
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lol sorry ! to me i found it very much a sense of reilef, it gave me something to think about while trying to nod off!!

Re: A Wake Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 11:19:41 AM AEST
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This poem reminds me of a poem I wrote that I will share with you in a private message; I'm not ready to post it yet. Ya might try counting sheep! Cute poem and good work.

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