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the wind that encircles you,
the darkness that seduces you,
the thoughts that torture you.
I am the tempter of fates,
the forgiver of sin,
the lust that drives you,
the heat that burns within.

In slumber I captivate you,
your sweetest dreams, your worst nightmares,
You cannot escape me,
nor do you want to,
for your destiny lies within me,
as mesmerizing as sunrise new,
you can't look away.
I am the path not taken,
and the past already written,
and I consume you,
like the love that you long for,
and the hate that you harbour.
I know your innermost secrets,
and deepest desires.
You fight me as your enemy,
then take me as your lover.

I am the one that pains your body and soul,
and the one that comforts and brings you peace.
I am your life,
and yet I decide your death,
with no beginning or end,
I am everything,
and I am nothing,
The tempter of fates.
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The Tempter of Fates

Contributed by thesinner on Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 04:39:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I am the mystery that leads you,
the wind that encircles you,
the darkness that seduces you,
the thoughts that torture you.
I am the tempter of fates,
the forgiver of sin,
the lust that drives you,
the heat that burns within.

In slumber I captivate you,
your sweetest dreams, your worst nightmares,
You cannot escape me,
nor do you want to,
for your destiny lies within me,
as mesmerizing as sunrise new,
you can't look away.
I am the path not taken,
and the past already written,
and I consume you,
like the love that you long for,
and the hate that you harbour.
I know your innermost secrets,
and deepest desires.
You fight me as your enemy,
then take me as your lover.

I am the one that pains your body and soul,
and the one that comforts and brings you peace.
I am your life,
and yet I decide your death,
with no beginning or end,
I am everything,
and I am nothing,
The tempter of fates.

Copyright © thesinner ... [ 2006-03-14 16:39:56]
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Re: The Tempter of Fates (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 04:46:05 PM AEST
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a good write on desire and anger ty for the post

Re: The Tempter of Fates (User Rating: 1 )
by Brasco on Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 05:32:03 PM AEST
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Great perspective, good write.

Re: The Tempter of Fates (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 10:14:33 PM AEST
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love the way you write way to go
you are a true poet
god bless freespirt

Re: The Tempter of Fates (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 10:49:55 PM AEST
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Amazing!!

Bravo!!...claps!!

A very powerful approach in this and holds true right to the end.
I enjoyed this very much!

Re: The Tempter of Fates (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 01:49:48 AM AEST
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very deep, i read it a few times 2 get the full meaning! awesome!

Re: The Tempter of Fates (User Rating: 1 )
by mickie on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 01:55:08 PM AEST
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you got real talent!
i am very impressed with this poem.
i love the use of words, and how vivid it unfolds.
good work!

Re: The Tempter of Fates (User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 07:41:29 PM AEST
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Once again, I am humbled by your approach. Poetry is treating you well.

Re: The Tempter of Fates (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 04:38:51 PM AEST
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wow i am impress
what an awsome dark write.
amazing

Re: The Tempter of Fates (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 12:14:37 AM AEST
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For some reason, this gave me the creeps... but in a good way!

The lines "You cannot escape me/ nor do you want to/ for your destiny lies within me," especially. I don't know.. I liked it a lot!

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