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Array ( [sid] => 116386 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => now I stare [time] => 2006-03-13 23:31:12 [hometext] => Better start to stare, Cause it will be your last, Close your eyes, And let the blade, End your life today [bodytext] => Better stare at me
Cause it would be your last
Close your eyes
And let the blade
End your life today

You sore through clouds
While drinking your tea
And at the end
A gate of gold
That is open just for you

But before you make it
A judge pulls you down
Opens his book
And looks down at you
Ans starts to laugh

He presses a button
And then you fall
Right through the clouds
On to the ground
To end it all

You go through the earth
To it's very core
And there you stop
In the place of fire
And a luke warm lake

You can watch
You can stare
You can get in
And you can swim
But now your stuck

The luke warm lake
Then turns to tar
And we all get stuck
And burned till death
Just to be reborn

We all start to cry
You our mommies
But their stuck too
Nothing they can do
To help you now

Now we're free
And can run about
For the little time
That we have left
Before we die

.......Just get reborn again.........

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now I stare

Contributed by diablohate on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 11:31:12 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Better stare at me
Cause it would be your last
Close your eyes
And let the blade
End your life today

You sore through clouds
While drinking your tea
And at the end
A gate of gold
That is open just for you

But before you make it
A judge pulls you down
Opens his book
And looks down at you
Ans starts to laugh

He presses a button
And then you fall
Right through the clouds
On to the ground
To end it all

You go through the earth
To it's very core
And there you stop
In the place of fire
And a luke warm lake

You can watch
You can stare
You can get in
And you can swim
But now your stuck

The luke warm lake
Then turns to tar
And we all get stuck
And burned till death
Just to be reborn

We all start to cry
You our mommies
But their stuck too
Nothing they can do
To help you now

Now we're free
And can run about
For the little time
That we have left
Before we die

.......Just get reborn again.........

Copyright © diablohate ... [ 2006-03-13 23:31:12]
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Re: now I stare (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 11:38:41 PM AEST
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wow, creepy. very nicely written though.

~natalya

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