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A Father's Love: For Brandon
Contributed by
eggflipper
on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 07:04:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The sacrifice woke as any other,
his henchman woke with fatal intentions.
For different reasons,
they greeted the morning.
The confused adolescent blinded
by his utopian invincibility
share a special love for his.
The deranged man blinded
by satan's red brilliance,
shared a perverted love for his.
Both men died that day.
One took his soul to exist in a watery bliss,
the other stayed to die again.
The calloused bond,
was drowned.
Father and son no more.
Copyright ©
eggflipper
... [
2006-03-13 19:04:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Father's Love: For Brandon
(User Rating: 1 ) by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 07:13:39 PM AEST (User
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omg that's horrible!not the poem, the whole being killed by his father thing...great write of course, full of metaphors, gotta love it. so sad though... |
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Re: A Father's Love: For Brandon
(User Rating: 1 ) by thesinner on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 08:16:24 PM AEST (User
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Absolutely tragic. I can't even imagine this.The words express everything.
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Re: A Father's Love: For Brandon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 10:45:57 PM AEST (User
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Powerful. And heartbreaking, the darkness that we of this world are capable of. I'm sorry for your loss.
Andrew |
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