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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Angels Gone
[time] => 2003-01-30 07:00:00
[hometext] => This poem is something I wrote for a course that I'm currently taking, but it has a lot of personal emotion in it. Please let me know what you think. And be brutally honest.
[bodytext] => Her face bruised
her body beaten cold eyes staring blankly towards the heavens Hair matted with blood breasts slashed their beauty ruined blood staining the body of an angel The lights penetrate through the window red and blue, red and blue one of those calls you pray you never get The phone rings the woman answers it and drops the receiver praying to God that they have the wrong number Hundreds of people no one knew how many cared most are crying I can’t seem to find the tears for her All emotion has left me my best friend is being lowered the tears still won’t come she is too young for this to be true Years later see her mother at the mall no hellos are exchanged we each blame ourselves Should have seen it coming could have stopped it would have taken her place if only I had been there a little earlier God has taken one of his angels home. We were unfit to keep her. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 39 [informant] => jasonw [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
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