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An even number that is divisble by 4.
Four the number of levels you have to be on
for people to get you.
Peopel more than one person.
The number of persons that will talk about you in 24/7.
24/7 is the hours and days God wakes you up and bring you thru.
Up is where you should always look
so no one can bring you down.
Down thats where the devil lives and he wants you there too.
Doing the what the devil wants is all the non Godly and worldly things we do.
God the one we should stride to be like to be a better person.
No matter what your age is today is your day to be more Godly. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 19 [informant] => BabyBEL [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

How old do you think you have to be?I'm sixteen!!

Contributed by BabyBEL on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 10:25:15 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Sixteen the number between fifteen and seventeen.
An even number that is divisble by 4.
Four the number of levels you have to be on
for people to get you.
Peopel more than one person.
The number of persons that will talk about you in 24/7.
24/7 is the hours and days God wakes you up and bring you thru.
Up is where you should always look
so no one can bring you down.
Down thats where the devil lives and he wants you there too.
Doing the what the devil wants is all the non Godly and worldly things we do.
God the one we should stride to be like to be a better person.
No matter what your age is today is your day to be more Godly.

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Re: How old do you think you have to be?I'm sixteen!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 12:18:41 PM AEST
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Good poem, Baby Bel. God can quicken one at any age. John the Baptist must have been regenerated in his mothers womb: and Isaiah - Isa. 49:1, and Jeremiah -1:5 "Before I formed thee in the belly I knew thee; and before thou camest out of the womb I sanctified the, and ordained thee a Prophet to the Nations." Some people believe in " gospel regeneration" but I see the gospel as good news that "converts" one who is already quickened to Spiritual life, because they are the only ones that recognizes it as "good news". If you get time read my poem "With Good Purpose". God bless you.

Re: How old do you think you have to be?I'm sixteen!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 12:59:17 PM AEST
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good poem, spell check a good idea, liked the starting rythm, it lost it a bit at the end for me,
thanx for sharing :-)

Re: How old do you think you have to be?I'm sixteen!! (User Rating: 1 )
by funnyface on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 03:40:25 PM AEST
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RECIEVING THE GIFT THAT GOD HAS GIVEN IS THE BEST THING ANYONE CAN DO. I AM PROUD OF ANYONE WHO WILL STAND UP FOR GOD. AND YOU SAID IT RIGHT JUST KEEP LOOKING UP GOD WILL BLESS YOU FOR IT. HE WILL ALSO BLESS YOU FOR WRITING THIS POEM. IT'S PEOPLE LIKE YOU THAT MAKE MY DAY WORTH WHILE . YOU HAVE GOT A GIFT FROM GOD HOLD ON TO IT AND NEVER LET THE DEVIL STEAL IT AWAY I WILL REMEMBER YOU IN MY PRAYERS. I'M PROUD OF YOU !!! YOUR POEM JUST MADE MY DAY THANKS FOR POSTING IT. MAY GOD BLESS YOU IN EVERY WAY

LOVE YOUR FRIEND : FUNNYFACE

Re: How old do you think you have to be?I'm sixteen!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 12:30:59 AM AEST
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Nicely ties in with my life. Inspirationally written.

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