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Pitty
Grumpy
Didn't get much sleepy
Visiting an old Antee A cup of coffee
Chatter and tv.
How is Bevee
My honey
A while ago she had sugery
Sugery on both knees
Whoa iz me
Want another coffee
Antee
Watching channel History
Things that used to be
A little sippy
I gotta go nine-thirty
Feeling peppy
Headed home a little speedy
Antee ask bout you Bevee
Think I'll have a pepsi
Wanna a pop son Charlie
Nearly ten-thirty
My heart beating rapidly
Cafiene surly
Time for bedie
Eleven-thirty
Eyes blury
Up again to the lavatory
One-twenty
My dog freckles kisses me
He had to wee
Quater to three
Whoa iz me
Can hardly see
Eyes puffy
Everyone else sleeping peacefully
Oh my boney knees
Placed a pillow for comfee
Lord why me
Said a Hail Mary
A Glory Be
Forgive me please
Five to Geeze
Seven o three
A morning beeze
A cup of joey
Two more and cream
Why couldn't I rest easy
Suppose my mind was busy
Another long day
Whoa iz me

Sinned

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Tired Eyes

Contributed by Sinned on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 09:10:19 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Whoa iz me
Pitty
Grumpy
Didn't get much sleepy
Visiting an old Antee A cup of coffee
Chatter and tv.
How is Bevee
My honey
A while ago she had sugery
Sugery on both knees
Whoa iz me
Want another coffee
Antee
Watching channel History
Things that used to be
A little sippy
I gotta go nine-thirty
Feeling peppy
Headed home a little speedy
Antee ask bout you Bevee
Think I'll have a pepsi
Wanna a pop son Charlie
Nearly ten-thirty
My heart beating rapidly
Cafiene surly
Time for bedie
Eleven-thirty
Eyes blury
Up again to the lavatory
One-twenty
My dog freckles kisses me
He had to wee
Quater to three
Whoa iz me
Can hardly see
Eyes puffy
Everyone else sleeping peacefully
Oh my boney knees
Placed a pillow for comfee
Lord why me
Said a Hail Mary
A Glory Be
Forgive me please
Five to Geeze
Seven o three
A morning beeze
A cup of joey
Two more and cream
Why couldn't I rest easy
Suppose my mind was busy
Another long day
Whoa iz me

Sinned

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Re: Tired Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 01:07:34 PM AEST
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Sounds only too familiar :-)
good read, enjoyed it thanx for sharing :-)

Re: Tired Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 04:13:34 PM AEST
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a fun read, well done

Re: Tired Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 09:48:26 PM AEST
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Excellent description of the humdrum of daily life and the tedium.
Would be nice to bring some magic into it. "Passion" :-)
Would'n't it?
Enjoyed it greatly
Blessings
Elizabeth

Re: Tired Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 08:43:28 PM AEST
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This is a cool poem. It sucks when you can't fall asleep.

Take care.

Scott

Re: Tired Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by thexshattered on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 10:41:14 PM AEST
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You know, I usually don't like poems like this. I think they're amateur and that the repetitive rhyme is annoying. Surprisingly, though, I liked this one. It was fun reading it, and a few errors and spelling really accented it well.

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