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Array ( [sid] => 116325 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Less than imperfection [time] => 2006-03-13 02:34:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Are you sure that what you want is me?
Its seems you want so much more...

Are you settling for me?
Until something better comes your way...

Are you wanting me to be like them?
So perfectly fake...

Are you not satisfied by my touch?
Closing your eyes to wish i was someone else...

Are you looking at me?
Or maybe the person behind me...

Im no longer sure of this "love" we say we have...

I feel i have been thrust into battle completely unarmed...

I am here for you, this is all i am...

Nothing less, Nothing more...

I will never be like them...

I am used and flawed...

I try my best to grin and bear this burden, but i feel the tears coming threw...

I only wish for you to love me as i love you

For me there is no other

You are my begining and me end

My eyes are bind to others

To me you are my Zen

Maybe i am a fool

For putting you so high

But this feeling for you i have

Burns within my eyes

Only time will prove these answers

For now ill just close my eyes

Hoping that one day soon

You'll see this flicker

Within my eyes

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Less than imperfection

Contributed by wikedladi on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 02:34:11 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Are you sure that what you want is me?
Its seems you want so much more...

Are you settling for me?
Until something better comes your way...

Are you wanting me to be like them?
So perfectly fake...

Are you not satisfied by my touch?
Closing your eyes to wish i was someone else...

Are you looking at me?
Or maybe the person behind me...

Im no longer sure of this "love" we say we have...

I feel i have been thrust into battle completely unarmed...

I am here for you, this is all i am...

Nothing less, Nothing more...

I will never be like them...

I am used and flawed...

I try my best to grin and bear this burden, but i feel the tears coming threw...

I only wish for you to love me as i love you

For me there is no other

You are my begining and me end

My eyes are bind to others

To me you are my Zen

Maybe i am a fool

For putting you so high

But this feeling for you i have

Burns within my eyes

Only time will prove these answers

For now ill just close my eyes

Hoping that one day soon

You'll see this flicker

Within my eyes





Copyright © wikedladi ... [ 2006-03-13 02:34:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Less than imperfection (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 02:43:51 AM AEST
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I know exaclty how you feel. Couldn't say it better myself. Great write. Hope that they see the flicker in your eyes also. Wondeful write


Re: Less than imperfection (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 01:38:45 PM AEST
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wonderful! i love it...and i no how u feel....sigh


Re: Less than imperfection (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 05:05:21 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, I understand exactly how you feel. Just hang in there, Im sure it will get better. : )




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