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Array ( [sid] => 116308 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => stupid girl [time] => 2006-03-12 20:39:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => maybe tomorrow you'll treat me right
but not today or right now probably not even tonight
tomorrow I will be beautiful, loving and smart
But right now I'm ugly and stupid, a girl without a heart
Today is always so long when words are spoken without thinking of what you say
I wish it was tomorrow, but it is always still today
Constantly reminding me I am stupid with no heart
slowly your words are tearing our love apart
Though your words don't last, they're spoken and then forgot
They stay in my mind
and they hurt my heart a lot
so when tomorrow comes for you, I am still here in today
Your words of hate to that stupid girl will never go away . . . . [comments] => 4 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Marly [notes] => Edited for Spelling as Requested by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

stupid girl

Contributed by Marly on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 08:39:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

maybe tomorrow you'll treat me right
but not today or right now probably not even tonight
tomorrow I will be beautiful, loving and smart
But right now I'm ugly and stupid, a girl without a heart
Today is always so long when words are spoken without thinking of what you say
I wish it was tomorrow, but it is always still today
Constantly reminding me I am stupid with no heart
slowly your words are tearing our love apart
Though your words don't last, they're spoken and then forgot
They stay in my mind
and they hurt my heart a lot
so when tomorrow comes for you, I am still here in today
Your words of hate to that stupid girl will never go away . . . .

Copyright © Marly ... [ 2006-03-12 20:39:23]
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Re: stupid girl (User Rating: 1 )
by MyNameIsJonas on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 08:46:33 PM AEST
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slowly your words are taring our love apart
Tearing? or Taring I dont know
Nice poem though

Re: stupid girl (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 08:58:55 PM AEST
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I know what it's like, believe me. Good write.

Re: stupid girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 10:07:16 PM AEST
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umm if the person u r with is not make'n u happy than u will not b able to may them happy, and that is what u wanta do right?

Re: stupid girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:34:47 PM AEST
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Kinda sad.
So get rid of him then.

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