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Array ( [sid] => 116303 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2006-03-12 19:17:23 [hometext] => Been Going through some tough times. This is a newfound way of dealing with it. [bodytext] => You ripped the dagger through my heart
still I thank God you and mom didnt part.
The puncture wound has begun to heal
but this story I can't reveal.
I can only confide in my notebook, my distress.
Surely I won't make it through with sucess.
Daddy, Why'd you do it?
This has been breaking me apart bit by bit.
Each day I wake, heal a bit more.
I tear out the sutures, but what for?
Why do I let this get under my skin
and let your chemical sin seep within.
Bless his little soul,
he's too young to be aware or have any control.
Youou really hit home with this one.
What you did can't be undone.
I swear if I could I'd beat her up.
Did she know you have kids? If so, thats really ****** up.
Nothing you can do can make this go away.
See my scars? They're here to stay.
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Untitled

Contributed by paigejacquelyn9 on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 07:17:23 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



You ripped the dagger through my heart
still I thank God you and mom didnt part.
The puncture wound has begun to heal
but this story I can't reveal.
I can only confide in my notebook, my distress.
Surely I won't make it through with sucess.
Daddy, Why'd you do it?
This has been breaking me apart bit by bit.
Each day I wake, heal a bit more.
I tear out the sutures, but what for?
Why do I let this get under my skin
and let your chemical sin seep within.
Bless his little soul,
he's too young to be aware or have any control.
Youou really hit home with this one.
What you did can't be undone.
I swear if I could I'd beat her up.
Did she know you have kids? If so, thats really ****** up.
Nothing you can do can make this go away.
See my scars? They're here to stay.




Copyright © paigejacquelyn9 ... [ 2006-03-12 19:17:23]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 07:58:31 PM AEST
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......yikes. angry, though that's the way i like it =D. but anyway, really great write, and i hope the scars do heal, good luck.

~natalya


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Nothingness on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 10:33:40 PM AEST
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great write but your not alone we all have scars that dont seem like they are going to heal but eventually they will get smaller hang in there




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