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Array ( [sid] => 1163 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Outside [time] => 2002-07-26 16:03:08 [hometext] => The city in high summer, at dusk, is still the most beautiful thing I can think of. I don't know why. It's just a certain quality... but I could never help but feel left out from the children playing in the streets, relectantly going inside once night fell... I would wander the streets of Boston at 15, having nowhere to go, and just watch the city as night fell. It was always somehow sad and beautiful at the same time. [bodytext] => It’s summer, the city at dusk.
Night is slowly creeping up the skyline,
Closing out the holes in the air.
There are holes in me too,
Gaping, precariously covered with Saran wrap,
Waiting for a jolt or a misstep to come undone again.
I sit on the curb at the base of a sign
No Parking Anytime
And watch the children play across the street…
It’s late August, and the air has the quality
That it never has in any other month
And the final rays of sun are almost orange against the concrete.
The children slowly scatter as sun fades into shadow,
Running up doorsteps and into apartments,
Somewhere safe, where they are wanted.
I walk across to the empty basketball court
And sit under the hoop, scuffing the pavement with my worn-out shoes,
Feeling the lingering warmth of the asphalt
And wondering where everything I know has gone. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 21 [informant] => skinny-little-punk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Outside

Contributed by skinny-little-punk on Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 04:03:08 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



It’s summer, the city at dusk.
Night is slowly creeping up the skyline,
Closing out the holes in the air.
There are holes in me too,
Gaping, precariously covered with Saran wrap,
Waiting for a jolt or a misstep to come undone again.
I sit on the curb at the base of a sign
No Parking Anytime
And watch the children play across the street…
It’s late August, and the air has the quality
That it never has in any other month
And the final rays of sun are almost orange against the concrete.
The children slowly scatter as sun fades into shadow,
Running up doorsteps and into apartments,
Somewhere safe, where they are wanted.
I walk across to the empty basketball court
And sit under the hoop, scuffing the pavement with my worn-out shoes,
Feeling the lingering warmth of the asphalt
And wondering where everything I know has gone.




Copyright © skinny-little-punk ... [ 2002-07-26 16:03:08]
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Re: Outside (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 04:26:02 PM AEST
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you share this moment so well. it has a beauty and a mystique about it... and a sadness as well. Great write!
*ginsdance*


Re: Outside (User Rating: 1 )
by Clarity on Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 10:50:46 PM AEST
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beautiful writing as always. i really enjoy reading your work. you capture so many emotions in your words. keep it up!

jen


Re: Outside (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 02:06:09 AM AEST
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I'm increasingly impressed by your writing Josh..everything you are turning out is so well written ...you have your own distinctive style. I love the whole atmosphere of this one
Chrissie x




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