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Array ( [sid] => 116280 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Without Enough [time] => 2006-03-12 07:11:18 [hometext] => i am left with no more to offer. comments appreciated. [bodytext] => Would that my smile
Had been enough
To intensify

Would that my eyes
Had been enough
To clarify

Would that my fingers
Had been enough
To electrify

Would that my voice
Had been enough
To gratify

Would that my lips
Had been enough
To satisfy

Would that my love
Had been enough
To rectify

Would that my soul
Had been enough
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Without Enough

Contributed by felicitous on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 07:11:18 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Would that my smile
Had been enough
To intensify

Would that my eyes
Had been enough
To clarify

Would that my fingers
Had been enough
To electrify

Would that my voice
Had been enough
To gratify

Would that my lips
Had been enough
To satisfy

Would that my love
Had been enough
To rectify

Would that my soul
Had been enough

Copyright © felicitous ... [ 2006-03-12 07:11:18]
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Re: Without Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by glassicallyunsuperficial on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 09:06:31 AM AEST
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I really like this poem.I like that it is sharp and to the point.
cheers,
-glass

Re: Without Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by ElevenToedSloth on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:06:01 AM AEST
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I usually detest simple poems.
But, this one has won me over.
I really love it.
It's perfect.

Re: Without Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:11:37 PM AEST
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Ooo very good! I like!
-Drapes

Re: Without Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by Nothingness on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 02:05:42 PM AEST
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very nice its really well written keep it up

Re: Without Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 04:47:48 PM AEST
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Fantasic.Loved it .It says it all. Great write!

Re: Without Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 12:23:02 AM AEST
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this was incredible...the questioning of wondering, the thoughts about why...well done

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