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That there’d come a day I’d be so ******
At someone whom I’ve so much adored
At someone whom my heart I’ve poured

I thought I’ve done, my last bit of crying
When in fact my tears, are still not drying
Pain is love and love is pain
I’m on the brink of being insane

This can’t be good, that much I know
No matter how hard, I try not to let it show
But it’s so hard, when I love you so much
And miss the way I feel, with your every touch

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Broken

Contributed by o7neves on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 03:06:39 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Never knew I’d feel like this
That there’d come a day I’d be so ******
At someone whom I’ve so much adored
At someone whom my heart I’ve poured

I thought I’ve done, my last bit of crying
When in fact my tears, are still not drying
Pain is love and love is pain
I’m on the brink of being insane

This can’t be good, that much I know
No matter how hard, I try not to let it show
But it’s so hard, when I love you so much
And miss the way I feel, with your every touch

Copyright Â© o7neves ... [ 2006-03-12 03:06:39]
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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by wikedladi on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 03:36:53 AM AEST
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Great write! im sorry you have to have these feelings.... hope things get better!

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 05:04:06 AM AEST
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strong poem if you asked my girlfriend she would say she was once feeling the same as you hurt is something we all have but some give it to others alot more then most i hope every thing works out for you as it did for me good write.
brad

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Nothingness on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 05:16:39 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, you are not alone in your pain i really hope things mend themselves fast for you

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:09:00 PM AEST
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oh tanya :( what happened? this poem is filled with sadness and grief, but nonetheless a great piece of work....glad to see you writing again dear, keep in touch...

curtis

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