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my gaze takes in
all that he is,
all that I want.
My pulse quickens as he walks towards me,
as I remember
words whispered with heated breath
and eyes aflame in expectation,
and my hands tremble with the desire
that he stirs deep within me.
He is so close now.
Every part of me aware of him,
every sense heightened
and I shiver with anticipation.
I feel his breath on my face as he lowers his lips to my skin
and he traces a molten path over my body.
He knows I can't resist,
so primal is my need for him,
betraying mans evolution with it's intensity.
He knows well the passion he stirs,
and the more he offers,
the more I want,
like a wolf ever hungry
and I am enveloped in the shroud of lust and longing
he creates.
And he he smiles in triumph,
for he knows I am his. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 2 [informant] => thesinner [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Desire Awakens

Contributed by thesinner on Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 05:11:04 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Drawn like a gull to the sea,
my gaze takes in
all that he is,
all that I want.
My pulse quickens as he walks towards me,
as I remember
words whispered with heated breath
and eyes aflame in expectation,
and my hands tremble with the desire
that he stirs deep within me.
He is so close now.
Every part of me aware of him,
every sense heightened
and I shiver with anticipation.
I feel his breath on my face as he lowers his lips to my skin
and he traces a molten path over my body.
He knows I can't resist,
so primal is my need for him,
betraying mans evolution with it's intensity.
He knows well the passion he stirs,
and the more he offers,
the more I want,
like a wolf ever hungry
and I am enveloped in the shroud of lust and longing
he creates.
And he he smiles in triumph,
for he knows I am his.

Copyright © thesinner ... [ 2006-03-11 17:11:04]
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Re: Desire Awakens (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 05:16:02 PM AEST
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...nice! i like the longing portrayed here. well done! --He knows well the passion he stirs,
and the more he offers,
the more I want,-- nice wording here. A++++

Re: Desire Awakens (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 06:44:01 PM AEST
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you draw the reader into this. Passionate and tastefully written.
Michelle

Re: Desire Awakens (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 07:13:58 PM AEST
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ooh i loved that. like the person above said, tastefully and very passionately written. fantastic poem.

~natalya

Re: Desire Awakens (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 05:35:48 PM AEST
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truly beautiful. passionate, and...there's a word i can't think of.

Amazing poem

- Bethani -

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