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Im letting you go
I thought we
Had a chance
To fix what
Was broken
But I was wrong
I see that now
She isnt a fling
Shes been there
All the time
Waiting for you
To leave me
How could I
Be so stupid
Shes the one
Who you wanted
Not me
So I'll be
Happy for you
That you found
Another chance
Good luck
Goodbye
I'll never forget
Our time together [comments] => 4 [counter] => 335 [topic] => 52 [informant] => DarkFaerie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Letting You Go

Contributed by DarkFaerie on Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 02:14:37 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I get the point
Im letting you go
I thought we
Had a chance
To fix what
Was broken
But I was wrong
I see that now
She isnt a fling
Shes been there
All the time
Waiting for you
To leave me
How could I
Be so stupid
Shes the one
Who you wanted
Not me
So I'll be
Happy for you
That you found
Another chance
Good luck
Goodbye
I'll never forget
Our time together

Copyright © DarkFaerie ... [ 2006-03-11 14:14:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Letting You Go (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 03:43:50 PM AEST
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its tough to lose people you care about. the feeling of failure never goes away, I hope that in time you see that sometimes its not the fault of one alone that makes things fall apart... sometimes its equal amounts of blame. im sorry for your loss and i hope your able to keep your chin up! you are a good person and sometimes people just make mistakes... great write i hope you never stop posting your poems ive always loved your writes... A++++

good job expressing your emotions

Re: Letting You Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 08:01:00 PM AEST
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Wow, not many girls would be able to have that attitude toward losing their boyfriends (I'm assuming that that is what it's about, I might be wrong though). Anyway, I give you respect for being able to let go.

Re: Letting You Go (User Rating: 1 )
by MyNameIsJonas on Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 09:50:16 PM AEST
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Ew break-ups :/
I myself am on the verge of one
Except im not doing it

On another note
Great poem

Re: Letting You Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 01:03:22 PM AEST
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perhaps another awaits you as corageous as
you are, u r just that u know, go slow and time may be your best friend, second only 2 the love u seek. a lovely write touching and makes one think about love in all it's capacity.

*******

Ben

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