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Array ( [sid] => 116205 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Believe me dad [time] => 2006-03-10 18:48:59 [hometext] => MY daughter has special needs and sometimes gets confused hopefully in this case she has not [bodytext] => Accusations flying around
Family members involved
Two different sides of the story
Will it ever be solved

Talk to me i;m listening
And i take your side
But i have a doubt in mind
What if you have lied

Daughter of mine so precious
Are you one hundred per cent
If so we'll stand by you
I'm sorry for being hesitant

Both families now fallen apart
Call it very strong morals
Now we have to be prepared
For all those nasty quarrels

Family close not any more
Disruption to our lives
Daughter of mine no burden to carry
Forget their made up lies



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Believe me dad

Contributed by asha1uk on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 06:48:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Accusations flying around
Family members involved
Two different sides of the story
Will it ever be solved

Talk to me i;m listening
And i take your side
But i have a doubt in mind
What if you have lied

Daughter of mine so precious
Are you one hundred per cent
If so we'll stand by you
I'm sorry for being hesitant

Both families now fallen apart
Call it very strong morals
Now we have to be prepared
For all those nasty quarrels

Family close not any more
Disruption to our lives
Daughter of mine no burden to carry
Forget their made up lies







Copyright © asha1uk ... [ 2006-03-10 18:48:59]
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Re: Believe me dad (User Rating: 1 )
by dougnut on Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 08:19:39 AM AEST
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Emotional poem,

Touched my heart,

I think in these situations, One person needs

to take control & try to mediate.

Family problems and the problems of everyday

day life are difficult The best way to sollve a

family argument is to give a hug. and show your love by your actions.


Thanks for sharing this true event Poem with us.

God Bless you all & i hope peace can be

restored .


Re: Believe me dad (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 09:17:44 AM AEST
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a very touching write, well done


Re: Believe me dad (User Rating: 1 )
by asha1uk on Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 12:46:08 PM AEST
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many thanks for your comments, need to get back on here soon as, i need to read more poems on here and comment myself..........


Re: Believe me dad (User Rating: 1 )
by asha1uk on Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 12:46:11 PM AEST
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many thanks for your comments, need to get back on here soon as, i need to read more poems on here and comment myself..........


Re: Believe me dad (User Rating: 1 )
by asha1uk on Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 12:46:17 PM AEST
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many thanks for your comments, need to get back on here soon as, i need to read more poems on here and comment myself..........


Re: Believe me dad (User Rating: 1 )
by Bolts on Sunday, 23rd January 2011 @ 09:05:12 AM AEST
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A topic with which many can empathize, good use of rhyme and nicely structured in my opinion. Not sure the last two lines quite fit, but that's just me being picky. I like this poem.




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