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This is the girl who has no life
This is the girl who thought about cutting her self with a nife
This is the girl who asked:what would you do if i died?
but all they did was lie!
This is the girl who crys her self to sleep
This is the girl who eats her pain away
This is the girl who was taken out of school
This is the girl who can't think straight
This is the girl who is retarded
This is the girl who has no friends
This is the girl who sits in her room alone
This is the girl who looks up too one man because he's all shes got
This is the girl who wont leave the house
This is the girl who thinks suicide is the only way
This is the girl who wrote this poem
This is the girl who has no life! [comments] => 8 [counter] => 307 [topic] => 72 [informant] => paul_x_walker [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

This is the girl who has no life! :(

Contributed by paul_x_walker on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 05:30:28 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

:(

This is the girl who has no life
This is the girl who thought about cutting her self with a nife
This is the girl who asked:what would you do if i died?
but all they did was lie!
This is the girl who crys her self to sleep
This is the girl who eats her pain away
This is the girl who was taken out of school
This is the girl who can't think straight
This is the girl who is retarded
This is the girl who has no friends
This is the girl who sits in her room alone
This is the girl who looks up too one man because he's all shes got
This is the girl who wont leave the house
This is the girl who thinks suicide is the only way
This is the girl who wrote this poem
This is the girl who has no life!

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Re: This is the girl who has no life! :( (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 05:57:50 PM AEST
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Wow, you definately stirred up some emotions there. Great poem, I loved the repitition, it blended perfectly with the meaning.
The ending was really sad, I hope one day you'll get over everything. If you need to talk, just PM me.

Re: This is the girl who has no life! :( (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 06:36:54 PM AEST
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Wow, that was brutally honest. I liked it.

Re: This is the girl who has no life! :( (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 10:12:52 PM AEST
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You are scaring me with this .
I love you

hugs

Re: This is the girl who has no life! :( (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 02:59:10 PM AEST
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ditto vampire queens comment but not in a homosexual way!!!????

My God we've never met!

J

Re: This is the girl who has no life! :( (User Rating: 1 )
by UnmovedMover on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 10:08:39 PM AEST
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You're not alone. Don't let society trink you into thinking you're worthless.

Re: This is the girl who has no life! :( (User Rating: 1 )
by aplsdka on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 08:39:04 PM AEST
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Hey Jen...

Nice poem, but i really hope you wouldn't do that... e-mail me some time, i miss talking to you.

Re: This is the girl who has no life! :( (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 03:10:50 PM AEST
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Mmm...interesting. I can relate. And I like the repetition, I have a few poems like that. And I just submitted a poem on the same topic, a lot of the same things said.
One thing though, it started off rhyming but then stopped... well, it's still good!
-Drapes

Re: This is the girl who has no life! :( (User Rating: 1 )
by Aeris030388 on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 08:00:28 AM AEST
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I know where your coming from. I was like that myself. Belive in yourself and anything is possible...even happiness.

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