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Muted Evil Lover
Contributed by
wikedladi
on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 02:12:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You're completely Blind...
You think you see everything so clearly,
But your view is so narrow.
You find faults in everyone elso so you dont have to look at yourself.
You wanted this to happen,
its no ones fault but your own.
If you were unhappy you should have spoke out!
Instead you held it in and rotted inside,
forcing yourself to become a ball of hate and envy.
There were no lies and no deciet.
You twisted things to fit your world.
Seeing things you wanted to see,
instead of looking at the truth.
You pushed everyone away-NO ONE LEFT YOU!
YOu blame everyone for your unhappiness
but it is all your own fault...
the lies were yours, the deciet you gave.
See now how you blame others to make yourself feel better?!
DO you feel better?!?! I hope you do...
YOU are the one who is faulted and wrong!
YOu are mistaking in all that you think!
The problem lies in you...
You Crazy Little Wh_ _ _ !
Copyright ©
wikedladi
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2006-03-10 14:12:44]
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Re: Muted Evil Lover
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by eggflipper on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 02:33:40 PM AEST
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| Message received loud and clear. It is unfortunate that some people cannot see past their own despair. I understand the anger, however, you probably could have done without the last line. Name calling always takes away from the message. Good job. |
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Re: Muted Evil Lover
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 02:46:54 PM AEST
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| is the word _ _ ore lol good write |
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Re: Muted Evil Lover
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 06:34:06 PM AEST
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| i really couldnt have said it better myself... i loved it, this is exactly what i've wanted to scream out! great great write, i know right where this came from and I love what you have said! A+++++ |
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Re: Muted Evil Lover
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 03:03:05 AM AEST
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| I would have to agree. Wonderful write and hope that who this is about gets the picture loud and clear. Really like the ending of this. |
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Re: Muted Evil Lover
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by whiteleo1984 on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 10:01:29 PM AEST
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| very powerful and deep i like it |
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