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Array ( [sid] => 116156 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BORN [time] => 2006-03-09 20:26:24 [hometext] => a idea pls comment if its good or not its kinda important [bodytext] => in the wild of the night with the winds howling

a blackened howl like a train off tracks

a spark of mothers light slices the sky

still unable to bring sight to his poor eyes

cold and barren he walks alone

no clother on his back he knows no shame

he was born small


a drifter from the start always thought to be alone

he wonders his domaine looking for insight

as he wanders this darkened forest he hears a sullen sound

a soft cry in the distant rain a shallow weep in the soden ground

he see a lone figure in the dark held to a tree

he wanders over as the rain mist covers his eyes

the first gaze of soggy eyes is a beauty unmatched

a slender creature of the same design


he see's that the lovely creature before him is lost

he askes if she knows what way

in precious words she says

i have been searching for something between the ocean

and the hills trying to fill the emptyness that slows within

since my life time i have a empty inside

i have never found anyone to fill the hurt i hide


i also been searching threw the dark and the light

mabey toghter we can step follow whats right

she looks and hold a tear as she knows this feels right

now in the days since the fellowship begain

they have both been furfilled

they love has grown and the fear not known

and there spirits been filled
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 73 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
BORN

Contributed by lostrelic on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 08:26:24 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract



in the wild of the night with the winds howling

a blackened howl like a train off tracks

a spark of mothers light slices the sky

still unable to bring sight to his poor eyes

cold and barren he walks alone

no clother on his back he knows no shame

he was born small


a drifter from the start always thought to be alone

he wonders his domaine looking for insight

as he wanders this darkened forest he hears a sullen sound

a soft cry in the distant rain a shallow weep in the soden ground

he see a lone figure in the dark held to a tree

he wanders over as the rain mist covers his eyes

the first gaze of soggy eyes is a beauty unmatched

a slender creature of the same design


he see's that the lovely creature before him is lost

he askes if she knows what way

in precious words she says

i have been searching for something between the ocean

and the hills trying to fill the emptyness that slows within

since my life time i have a empty inside

i have never found anyone to fill the hurt i hide


i also been searching threw the dark and the light

mabey toghter we can step follow whats right

she looks and hold a tear as she knows this feels right

now in the days since the fellowship begain

they have both been furfilled

they love has grown and the fear not known

and there spirits been filled




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Re: BORN (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 08:34:16 PM AEST
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Beautiful Write. I can so relate to these feelings .


Re: BORN (User Rating: 1 )
by whiteleo1984 on Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 09:24:25 AM AEST
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awesome write, i relate to you




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