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Array ( [sid] => 116152 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Somrthing left out of madness, what is it? well its probibly nothing. THINK [time] => 2006-03-09 19:36:25 [hometext] => another think it or **** it poem, ive grown bored of living upto hype, read and think, something people dont do enough of in my opinion [bodytext] =>


this poem is soreded, so dont say i warned you
its cast from beer and perverted wonton
or is it?
do i ask or demand, tell or flement
is it reality contrast or make beleive
am i something i have hidden
no answers, but the trusth is up my sleve !!!!

does a man contest what love is
does a woman deny what desire is
does any party blame themselves
do they blame each other
little boys and girls in primary school
say each other are ikkle


what happened in half a decade
to cage to view
br /> does the fabric of life base itself on such silly immature appendiges
or does the whole world retire to that state of *****
of being ******
pure?

Put it bluntly, but still ugly, sinful, and sorded
Either, if there was a girl at 7 willing to *****, would i of
Ratify if there was a drug at 11 to take, would it of you of tuck
Vicious lies spin millions of sins in thw world, so contrive at a bare few
Edged blades dig deep in that of stupid bunderageness
Rape of the media and radio pre pubescent madness, fuelled with the media of the grown ups
Talking always of whos who, whos mature, whos sick
Im putting a thirteen year old girl on a music vid to talk about
Only for the fact her sexual relationship is over with a boy whos older
Not like she didnt write it

it was a man or a woman 29 years her senior
whats the madness

I SPELT pervertion THIS SPELLING IS INCORRECT BUT IM HIGH FROM acid

bend the beam of the hey, but then again EYE'D simply say!

whos a peado
is god?
his seed was planted in 13 y/o mary
and he's as old as the universe
where is moral constant
if all parties to blame, are both the benefactors
and the crime themselves
all i wanted was a kiss
and now
what the ****
its lead to this!!!!

I DONT DO WHAT IS COMMANDED OF ME
TO WHAT OITHER SIMPLE MINDED OTHERS DO
ONLY FROM
FEAR
OF
THE
LAW [comments] => 4 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 73 [informant] => 01_zanzebar [notes] => Edited for Content by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
Somrthing left out of madness, what is it? well its probibly nothing. THINK

Contributed by 01_zanzebar on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 07:36:25 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract






this poem is soreded, so dont say i warned you
its cast from beer and perverted wonton
or is it?
do i ask or demand, tell or flement
is it reality contrast or make beleive
am i something i have hidden
no answers, but the trusth is up my sleve !!!!

does a man contest what love is
does a woman deny what desire is
does any party blame themselves
do they blame each other
little boys and girls in primary school
say each other are ikkle


what happened in half a decade
to cage to view
br /> does the fabric of life base itself on such silly immature appendiges
or does the whole world retire to that state of *****
of being ******
pure?

Put it bluntly, but still ugly, sinful, and sorded
Either, if there was a girl at 7 willing to *****, would i of
Ratify if there was a drug at 11 to take, would it of you of tuck
Vicious lies spin millions of sins in thw world, so contrive at a bare few
Edged blades dig deep in that of stupid bunderageness
Rape of the media and radio pre pubescent madness, fuelled with the media of the grown ups
Talking always of whos who, whos mature, whos sick
Im putting a thirteen year old girl on a music vid to talk about
Only for the fact her sexual relationship is over with a boy whos older
Not like she didnt write it

it was a man or a woman 29 years her senior
whats the madness

I SPELT pervertion THIS SPELLING IS INCORRECT BUT IM HIGH FROM acid

bend the beam of the hey, but then again EYE'D simply say!

whos a peado
is god?
his seed was planted in 13 y/o mary
and he's as old as the universe
where is moral constant
if all parties to blame, are both the benefactors
and the crime themselves
all i wanted was a kiss
and now
what the ****
its lead to this!!!!

I DONT DO WHAT IS COMMANDED OF ME
TO WHAT OITHER SIMPLE MINDED OTHERS DO
ONLY FROM
FEAR
OF
THE
LAW




Copyright © 01_zanzebar ... [ 2006-03-09 19:36:25]
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Re: Somrthing left out of madness, what is it? well its probibly nothing. THINK (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 08:49:20 PM AEST
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That was interesting.


Re: Somrthing left out of madness, what is it? well its probibly nothing. THINK (User Rating: 1 )
by brittaney on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 09:02:36 PM AEST
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Wow. Um... maybe you should stop writeing mean things on other people's GOOD poems, like "The Devils Kiss" if you write poems like THIS.
uhh... yeah


Re: Somrthing left out of madness, what is it? well its probibly nothing. THINK (User Rating: 1 )
by 01_zanzebar on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:37:35 PM AEST
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i think ppl didnt understabd the message i was giving hear






unfortunatly, not many have ever understood on this site, it feels too close-minded


Re: Somrthing left out of madness, what is it? well its probibly nothing. THINK (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:44:30 PM AEST
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different... "i may not understand the message" but i know when i read an intersting poem. this is one of those. however... becareful with your comments on the intelligence of the members of this site... you may offend some people. good poem A++++ very unique




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