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Array ( [sid] => 116149 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Leave Me [time] => 2006-03-09 18:39:07 [hometext] => THis is another peom that I wrote when Pat and I broke up. Comments are welcome [bodytext] => You leave me curious,
You leave me confused.
You punched me hard,
And left a bruise.

How hard I wonder,
How angry I feel.
And still you act,
Like it's no big deal.

My heart is stained,
My pain is strong.
Deep down I hated,
You all along.

I still will laugh,
I still will cry.
I do still wish,
That you would die.

Dont think for a second,
I'll take you back.
And if you do,
You're a maniac.

My life will go on,
And so will yours.
So I'll burn our bridge,
And shut the door. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 22 [informant] => brittaney [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

You Leave Me

Contributed by brittaney on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 06:39:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You leave me curious,
You leave me confused.
You punched me hard,
And left a bruise.

How hard I wonder,
How angry I feel.
And still you act,
Like it's no big deal.

My heart is stained,
My pain is strong.
Deep down I hated,
You all along.

I still will laugh,
I still will cry.
I do still wish,
That you would die.

Dont think for a second,
I'll take you back.
And if you do,
You're a maniac.

My life will go on,
And so will yours.
So I'll burn our bridge,
And shut the door.

Copyright © brittaney ... [ 2006-03-09 18:39:07]
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Re: You Leave Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 08:10:50 PM AEST
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wow u go! that rocks! good 4 u!

Re: You Leave Me (User Rating: 1 )
by moses on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 08:18:52 PM AEST
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Well done, breakups always have been a big deal to me too, ive written countless poems about them.
Filled with emotion, yet not too complex, i liked it a lot.

keep it up,
-moses

Re: You Leave Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 09:35:01 PM AEST
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Whoa...powerful stuff.

You've got a real good flow thing goin' there. Very very good indeed.

Keep it up and thank you for sharing.

Tim
:-)

Re: You Leave Me (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:49:17 PM AEST
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strong write! gets your point across well. you shouldn't ever stand for abuse! great job with your poem A++++ best of luck to you

Re: You Leave Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 07:10:51 PM AEST
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Brittaney

I hope you mean it and keep this pansy--Pat away.
Any man who respects a woman would never strike her.
I feel hurt and anger in your poem.
As far as hate I say pray he change,but burn that bridge.

Sinned

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