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When it did you felt ever so secure
Never felt like this before... Not even when all was going ones' way
Something sparkling and easy feeling like the end of a beautiful Rainbow
Like you could touch the fluffiness of big puffy clouds
Like seeing the sun "glow" and the moon "beam" in ways it never has
What could this mean... A new beginning that has never been
Happiness that wouldn't stop
A breath taking of certain events... Yet not quiet in place

Complete... Solitude
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Images that become clearer

Contributed by brew on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 09:35:16 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Have you ever just had a bright ray of sunshine... appear
When it did you felt ever so secure
Never felt like this before... Not even when all was going ones' way
Something sparkling and easy feeling like the end of a beautiful Rainbow
Like you could touch the fluffiness of big puffy clouds
Like seeing the sun "glow" and the moon "beam" in ways it never has
What could this mean... A new beginning that has never been
Happiness that wouldn't stop
A breath taking of certain events... Yet not quiet in place

Complete... Solitude

Copyright © brew ... [ 2006-03-08 21:35:16]
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Re: Images that become clearer (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 09:47:28 PM AEST
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Good write. I really liked it.

Re: Images that become clearer (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 07:25:42 PM AEST
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Oh my dear BREW!!! How positively STUNNING hun!

I have to say, this took my breath away. What an amazing emotion
you have captured with these words.

I have felt this. I wish it wouldn't disappear so quickly sometimes ...

wow. Masterful entrapment of emotion, sweetie.

*hugs*
~Breezy

Re: Images that become clearer (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 09:31:56 AM AEST
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I understand exactly where your coming from, sometimes I really get off on nature and get an enormous sense of well being, life is just great at the moment (and all this before my morning meds!)
Nice work.

J

Re: Images that become clearer (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 08:08:26 AM AEST
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I loved this write Brew.
Thanks for posting.
Jeff

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