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[sid] => 116099
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Security
[time] => 2006-03-08 19:43:15
[hometext] => Just a short acrostic poem. If I could only get it to post right!
[bodytext] => Subtle touch of your fingertips
Endless gaze from your eyes
Caring words when I’m feeling low
Understanding when I need to cry
Romance that is unexpected
Intimate moments alone
Tenderness in a single touch
Your kiss upon coming home
My love in a word to me this is Security.
Shannon
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 334
[topic] => 25
[informant] => LoveStruck_Hippie
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[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => MiscPoems
)
Security
Contributed by
LoveStruck_Hippie
on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 07:43:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Subtle touch of your fingertips
Endless gaze from your eyes
Caring words when I’m feeling low
Understanding when I need to cry
Romance that is unexpected
Intimate moments alone
Tenderness in a single touch
Your kiss upon coming home
My love in a word to me this is Security.
Shannon
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LoveStruck_Hippie
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2006-03-08 19:43:15]
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Re: Security
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 07:55:34 PM AEST
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A beautiful message hun! And lovingly written. I think a
lot of people could relate to this. You have a sweet way with
words and the like ...
An emotion captured. And captured well !!
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: Security
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 08:21:21 PM AEST
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i agree with breezy...a very loving and heartfelt poem.
wiz |
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Re: Security
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 05:41:38 PM AEST
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How ever this comes out as far as posting you've definately nailed in the beauty dept.
what a a lovely write so honest and straight foward, hey shannon, it works. lovely to read thanks 4 sharing your emotions.
Ben |
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Re: Security
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 07:39:52 PM AEST
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Wow! (and I don't say that lightly) impressive by far the best thing I've read today.
J |
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Re: Security
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 09:48:10 PM AEST
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A lovely writting more than a poem. No matter what side of the page in essence how ever one reads this it's beautiful. A true scence of appreciation and honesty in your writting i get from you. *****
Ben |
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Re: Security
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by JGB on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 12:51:43 PM AEST
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| Sweet and beautiful. My husband makes me feel like this. |
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Re: Security
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 04:45:25 PM AEST
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I like this, it's very sweet.
I just adore how simple it is. Love doesn't need big words and huge fancy lines, it doesn't need that, because the small things say it all.
Wonderful write, my friend.
Much love,
Phyllis xxx |
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Re: Security
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by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 05:38:08 PM AEST
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| Very creative how you made the first letter of each line spell security. wonderful poem! |
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