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Array ( [sid] => 116088 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gone [time] => 2006-03-08 17:06:21 [hometext] => A song....10 points to whoever can guess what it is about! [bodytext] => I heard all the voices
Telling me to move on
But my heart can be so stubborn
And it just seems so wrong

You always used to tell me:
When faith seems so far away
And love hised in the dark
You can come to me and hopefully
I can chase all the shadows away

Choking on all my fears
Trying to fight back all the tears
Saying that it will be alright
I cry out while praying
Let me lose the fight. Let me drown tonight

You left me and I don't know how
Who can I go to now
When all seems so wrong
I miss you by my side
I'm dying because now you're gone
I'm crying because now you're gone [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 34 [informant] => DesolantDreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Gone

Contributed by DesolantDreamer on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 05:06:21 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I heard all the voices
Telling me to move on
But my heart can be so stubborn
And it just seems so wrong

You always used to tell me:
When faith seems so far away
And love hised in the dark
You can come to me and hopefully
I can chase all the shadows away

Choking on all my fears
Trying to fight back all the tears
Saying that it will be alright
I cry out while praying
Let me lose the fight. Let me drown tonight

You left me and I don't know how
Who can I go to now
When all seems so wrong
I miss you by my side
I'm dying because now you're gone
I'm crying because now you're gone

Copyright © DesolantDreamer ... [ 2006-03-08 17:06:21]
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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by moses on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 05:30:41 PM AEST
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Nicce...I really like it, well done.

Keep it all up,
-moses

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:47:30 PM AEST
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it's great because so many will be able to relate, sorta put their own spin to it. But really awesome write.

~natalya

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 10:35:53 PM AEST
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Awww... That last stanza really got to me.. It's so terrible, it ends utterly lonely.

This is very good. I like the shifting rhyme scheme, it works really well, and isn't too obvious.

Simple, yet effective writing. I really like this.

Great write,
Phil xxx

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