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There's a voice in my head and its there everyday
And it whispers things no one ever must know
And I beg on my knees but still it wont go
So I'm rinsing my hands to get rid of the stains
So the voices Im hearing will give up the games
But they wont go away they wont leave me alone
But they do say your name and they do hear me moan
Then I'm down on my knees and I beg and I plead
Then the voices get louder and my hands start to bleed
Because I'm biting my hands to rid me of the stain
Because your blood won't budge and nor will the pain
I'm sorry I hurt you but I meant what I said
I'm sorry your hurting me even now that your dead
It hurts me to say it but nothing was ever more true
It hurts me to love you and I truly hate you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 6 [informant] => xXBrokenTearsXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Insane Mind

Contributed by xXBrokenTearsXx on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 03:57:33 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

There's a stain on my hands and it wont go away
There's a voice in my head and its there everyday
And it whispers things no one ever must know
And I beg on my knees but still it wont go
So I'm rinsing my hands to get rid of the stains
So the voices Im hearing will give up the games
But they wont go away they wont leave me alone
But they do say your name and they do hear me moan
Then I'm down on my knees and I beg and I plead
Then the voices get louder and my hands start to bleed
Because I'm biting my hands to rid me of the stain
Because your blood won't budge and nor will the pain
I'm sorry I hurt you but I meant what I said
I'm sorry your hurting me even now that your dead
It hurts me to say it but nothing was ever more true
It hurts me to love you and I truly hate you.

Copyright © xXBrokenTearsXx ... [ 2006-03-08 15:57:33]
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Re: Insane Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 04:58:12 PM AEST
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beyond question, your anger is felt.
The obscurity of this poem is amazing and i truly adore it.
Pain brings poems and poems bring pleasure to others who read them.
Be happy for you have made me smile upon the colouring of this poem.
In other words. very well written.
keep up the good work.
-Trini

Re: Insane Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:55:38 PM AEST
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omg that was just sooo well expressed.
I could totally feel your pain, don't you just hate that whole i love you/hate you deal? *sigh* ya but anyway really great poem.

~natalya

Re: Insane Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by longago on Sunday, 23rd January 2011 @ 05:11:29 AM AEST
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this is a fantastic poem, theres so many levels to it that i can read and reread it and each time is seems to have a different a meaning

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