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Array ( [sid] => 116042 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Come Quickly, Love [time] => 2006-03-08 00:12:02 [hometext] => I hope it makes sense to you, cause it confuses me.... [bodytext] => Our lives were once one before,
together with love that other's would adore
I spent tons of my time with you
never knowing of your true feelings of blue
our love was cut short before it became great
now i only feel the feeling of hate
for you were my only one, the love of my life
great was our time together
but i wanted you for my wife
i miss the times of the past
for i thought that they would always last
but i was wrong
and the music became faint of our beautiful song
here i stand, alone again
looking for a new love to share
feeling no fear for these feelings from me are rare
i wish of her to be the one
and i hope that that love will never be done
come quickly , my new love
and let us soar the skies like two beautiful doves
i wait for that day
when love once again comes my way
and i hope and pray for her to come soon
and shine her light as bright as the moon
for the rays of the sun
are as bright as our love when its said and done
come quickly, my new love
and let us be as one like the one above
caring and loving that will never end
and i will forget of my past sin [comments] => 4 [counter] => 518 [topic] => 2 [informant] => whiteleo1984 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Come Quickly, Love

Contributed by whiteleo1984 on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 12:12:02 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Our lives were once one before,
together with love that other's would adore
I spent tons of my time with you
never knowing of your true feelings of blue
our love was cut short before it became great
now i only feel the feeling of hate
for you were my only one, the love of my life
great was our time together
but i wanted you for my wife
i miss the times of the past
for i thought that they would always last
but i was wrong
and the music became faint of our beautiful song
here i stand, alone again
looking for a new love to share
feeling no fear for these feelings from me are rare
i wish of her to be the one
and i hope that that love will never be done
come quickly , my new love
and let us soar the skies like two beautiful doves
i wait for that day
when love once again comes my way
and i hope and pray for her to come soon
and shine her light as bright as the moon
for the rays of the sun
are as bright as our love when its said and done
come quickly, my new love
and let us be as one like the one above
caring and loving that will never end
and i will forget of my past sin




Copyright © whiteleo1984 ... [ 2006-03-08 00:12:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Come Quickly, Love (User Rating: 1 )
by diablohate on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 12:23:05 AM AEST
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well i'm moved
I should feel your pain
but instead i don't
my my opinion
you were better off loney
then tring to find your real love
(everybody tries to find their soul mate....the only person that will complete them in everyway, but the this is just a dream only for lovers that dare to enter)
remember that love is a powerful thing
good luck finding your mate.


Re: Come Quickly, Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 01:35:28 AM AEST
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This is a great poem.
Very moving.
We must remember...
...that the past exists to remind us...
...that pain is real...
...but we should not look back...
...and regret as often as we should.

Keep writing.

"Don't find love, let love find you."


Re: Come Quickly, Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 02:38:12 PM AEST
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i think its really great that even though u had a bad past u still have so much hope 4 a better future!


Re: Come Quickly, Love (User Rating: 1 )
by dougnut on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 04:50:38 AM AEST
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Another poem from the heart showing real pain and emotion.

you will move on somebody out there is searching for you, do not search for them.It Will Happen

Great read beutifuly portrayed, Keep writing


Dougnut.




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