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Array ( [sid] => 116041 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My mind [time] => 2006-03-07 23:41:46 [hometext] => My thoughts [bodytext] => As I look in the eyes of the monster
All I see is death
I want to escape from it's sight
But it's hard to look away
When everything around you is dead
I lose my mind and soon my soul
To the beast that never dies
If I try to run
It will surely catch me......

No use in running
When there is nowhere to run
No use in caring
When there is nobody to care about
No use to rely on hope
When there is no hope to be found

We all stare at the monster
We are all it's slaves
We can not run away
We can only cry

We are are born perfect
In the eyes of a mother

So why do we cry
When the monster
That we fear
Is the very monster
That we stare at
everyday in
the mirror of shame

Let these words be your wisdom
(only love those who don't want to be loved)
(only care for those who don't want to be cared for)
(only feed those who don't want to be fed)
(only hate those who don't want to be hated)
(only save those who don't want to be saved)

Final words:
In life there is a path that splits two ways
Some people will tell you that this path is right
Others will tell you different
But all we have that seperates me from you(reader) and everybody else
Is two things.....
1.Gender
2.The will to make your own choices
Don't let anyone take that from you (2)
Cause then nothing seperates you from a pet
(you may not agree with me, but at least think about it)
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 63 [informant] => diablohate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )
My mind

Contributed by diablohate on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 11:41:46 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday



As I look in the eyes of the monster
All I see is death
I want to escape from it's sight
But it's hard to look away
When everything around you is dead
I lose my mind and soon my soul
To the beast that never dies
If I try to run
It will surely catch me......

No use in running
When there is nowhere to run
No use in caring
When there is nobody to care about
No use to rely on hope
When there is no hope to be found

We all stare at the monster
We are all it's slaves
We can not run away
We can only cry

We are are born perfect
In the eyes of a mother

So why do we cry
When the monster
That we fear
Is the very monster
That we stare at
everyday in
the mirror of shame

Let these words be your wisdom
(only love those who don't want to be loved)
(only care for those who don't want to be cared for)
(only feed those who don't want to be fed)
(only hate those who don't want to be hated)
(only save those who don't want to be saved)

Final words:
In life there is a path that splits two ways
Some people will tell you that this path is right
Others will tell you different
But all we have that seperates me from you(reader) and everybody else
Is two things.....
1.Gender
2.The will to make your own choices
Don't let anyone take that from you (2)
Cause then nothing seperates you from a pet
(you may not agree with me, but at least think about it)




Copyright © diablohate ... [ 2006-03-07 23:41:46]
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Re: My mind (User Rating: 1 )
by diablohate on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 12:14:10 AM AEST
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sorry for the double post


Re: My mind (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 12:29:27 AM AEST
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oh i loved it, so insightful, the entire perspective of it all..... wonderful write.

~natalya




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