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Array ( [sid] => 116026 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Running on empty [time] => 2006-03-07 19:41:55 [hometext] => please read i appreciate getting this off my chest [bodytext] => you don't understand,
My potential has reached it's limit,
I have exhausted all my resources,
I can stand only so much literal *********,
riding the coatails of previous epiphanies,
I am surely finished,
take, take, take, nothing great I have given,
anytime near the present,
Years ago, I was once a hero,
Years ago I stood for something,
If I could only describe it,
I wouldn't have this ***** problem,
I am gripped by something greater than apathy,
finding no paths to express my ideology,
just knowing that a desk job will never suit me,
my blood burns to find words to save me,
it's either poetry or the army,
for my creativity is running on empty. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 48 [informant] => BSteel [notes] => Edited for Language by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Running on empty

Contributed by BSteel on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 07:41:55 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

you don't understand,
My potential has reached it's limit,
I have exhausted all my resources,
I can stand only so much literal *********,
riding the coatails of previous epiphanies,
I am surely finished,
take, take, take, nothing great I have given,
anytime near the present,
Years ago, I was once a hero,
Years ago I stood for something,
If I could only describe it,
I wouldn't have this ***** problem,
I am gripped by something greater than apathy,
finding no paths to express my ideology,
just knowing that a desk job will never suit me,
my blood burns to find words to save me,
it's either poetry or the army,
for my creativity is running on empty.

Copyright © BSteel ... [ 2006-03-07 19:41:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Running on empty (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 08:13:30 PM AEST
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a good write with alot to say good post
r.m.wilder

Re: Running on empty (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:51:42 PM AEST
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I can totally relate. Sometimes I feel Like I'm on the edge of something, but I really don't know what that something is. At least I know I'm not the only lost one.
Great write!

Re: Running on empty (User Rating: 1 )
by funnyface on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:10:18 PM AEST
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GOOD WRITE !!! I TOO FEEL THAT I'M RUNNING ON EMPTY SOMETIMES I FEEL THAT I'M NOT GOING TO HAVE ENOUGH ENERGY TO DO ANYTHING BUT WITH PRAYER I GET BACK ON MY FEET !!!
ENJOYED THE POEM!!

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