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Array ( [sid] => 116009 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => to all thats laid before me [time] => 2006-03-07 15:31:04 [hometext] => it flows nice but so many thoughts in this write i hope its not confusing [bodytext] => in my solitay seclusion i wonder in midst of emptyness
a burden of my shallow soul i lay at the water bed
to genly lift and wash away the havoc i create
in the garden of my surrender i wander in the fake

watching little creatures scurry no violence that they partake
in the middle of this multitude a certain beauty takes shape
a chaotic rhythm in its form a vision with out mistake
all the creatures line up in this litle of a wake

and threw all thats laid before me this prattle of the blind
i escape with the vision thats burned across my mind
and i holler at the darkness it time for you to shed light
lets wake up all the passive lets breath a little fright

now watch and listen to the fathers
they died for us so our freedom will last
not that we can get drunk and forget our sorrow with a blast

so now a little lighter and feeling a little clean
i have spotted something Precious a little glitter in the air
i follow it in the shadow its weight so hard to bare
now running from the shadow it claws dig with out a care

i fall to the ground and look and weep
the problems are all to deep
i fall in the hurry my final step was to steep

so threw all that's laid before the shadows and the light
i will always love the surrender and follow from the night
with all that i love i will never give up the fight [comments] => 5 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 73 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
to all thats laid before me

Contributed by lostrelic on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 03:31:04 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract



in my solitay seclusion i wonder in midst of emptyness
a burden of my shallow soul i lay at the water bed
to genly lift and wash away the havoc i create
in the garden of my surrender i wander in the fake

watching little creatures scurry no violence that they partake
in the middle of this multitude a certain beauty takes shape
a chaotic rhythm in its form a vision with out mistake
all the creatures line up in this litle of a wake

and threw all thats laid before me this prattle of the blind
i escape with the vision thats burned across my mind
and i holler at the darkness it time for you to shed light
lets wake up all the passive lets breath a little fright

now watch and listen to the fathers
they died for us so our freedom will last
not that we can get drunk and forget our sorrow with a blast

so now a little lighter and feeling a little clean
i have spotted something Precious a little glitter in the air
i follow it in the shadow its weight so hard to bare
now running from the shadow it claws dig with out a care

i fall to the ground and look and weep
the problems are all to deep
i fall in the hurry my final step was to steep

so threw all that's laid before the shadows and the light
i will always love the surrender and follow from the night
with all that i love i will never give up the fight




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Re: to all thats laid before me (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 04:57:02 PM AEST
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great sentiment


Re: to all thats laid before me (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 06:07:37 PM AEST
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wow i think its great!


Re: to all thats laid before me (User Rating: 1 )
by MuCho_AmOr on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 06:15:33 PM AEST
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Well let me just say that I absolutely loved every bit of it.


Re: to all thats laid before me (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 12:45:32 AM AEST
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very nice


Re: to all thats laid before me (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 05:01:29 AM AEST
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i got lost in the magic of the language, well written




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