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When you got her pregnant, you told her to have an abortion but she refused.
You dumped her even though she was carrying your child.
You destroyed her life and you've got me riled.
She says she still loves you and that fills me with disgust.
She thought you were a person she could trust.
You're a piece of scum in my eyes.
Women may love you but you are someone I despise.
When you get what you want from women, you give them the boot.
Now my sister is going to slap you with a paternity suit.
When it comes to your conquests, you love to boast.
My sister was nothing but another notch on your bedpost.
My sister used to say you were a good man but I had my doubts.
When you used another girl, your luck ran out.
You got this girl pregnant and something bad happened to you.
Her father found out and he beat you black and blue.
Maybe now you'll be more careful about who you use.
It's not fun walking on crutches and being bruised. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 6 [informant] => randyjohnson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

You're a piece of scum

Contributed by randyjohnson on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:34:58 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

My sister is just another girl who you used.
When you got her pregnant, you told her to have an abortion but she refused.
You dumped her even though she was carrying your child.
You destroyed her life and you've got me riled.
She says she still loves you and that fills me with disgust.
She thought you were a person she could trust.
You're a piece of scum in my eyes.
Women may love you but you are someone I despise.
When you get what you want from women, you give them the boot.
Now my sister is going to slap you with a paternity suit.
When it comes to your conquests, you love to boast.
My sister was nothing but another notch on your bedpost.
My sister used to say you were a good man but I had my doubts.
When you used another girl, your luck ran out.
You got this girl pregnant and something bad happened to you.
Her father found out and he beat you black and blue.
Maybe now you'll be more careful about who you use.
It's not fun walking on crutches and being bruised.

Copyright © randyjohnson ... [ 2006-03-07 09:34:58]
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Re: You're a piece of scum (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:33:58 PM AEST
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Hey, this poem cracked me up. HAHAHA! If the above scenario were a true story, maybe I wouldn't laugh as much. But the fact that you just made it up makes it hilarious to me. I love the part when the dad beats up the dude and the sister slaps him with a paternity suit. HAHA! Good stuff. It was really well-written and you rhymed the whole thing. I'm impressed.

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