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Array ( [sid] => 115971 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Still She Sleeps [time] => 2006-03-06 19:41:07 [hometext] => the day I realized love [bodytext] => He walks to the window,
uncertain of the Word's wisdom.
Yet,
she continues her safety
with the symbolic nature.

The knowledge of a lifetime
never equipped him to comprehend.
Just another man who misunderstood Jesus.

His shoulders,
carry inadequacies for the pillow.
His warmth,
jealous of the blankets.

Musical interludes
interrupt the momentary transgressions.
A flashback
reminds him of destiny.

The revelation of a momentary man
forces him to relive history,
void of its moments,
alive in its emotions.
Yet,
still she sleeps,
safe,
warm,
in love.

She awakes to cast loving eyes on the sailor.
Frozen for a moment,
then realizes love will never destroy,
Peter returns to her side. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 2 [informant] => eggflipper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Still She Sleeps

Contributed by eggflipper on Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 07:41:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

He walks to the window,
uncertain of the Word's wisdom.
Yet,
she continues her safety
with the symbolic nature.

The knowledge of a lifetime
never equipped him to comprehend.
Just another man who misunderstood Jesus.

His shoulders,
carry inadequacies for the pillow.
His warmth,
jealous of the blankets.

Musical interludes
interrupt the momentary transgressions.
A flashback
reminds him of destiny.

The revelation of a momentary man
forces him to relive history,
void of its moments,
alive in its emotions.
Yet,
still she sleeps,
safe,
warm,
in love.

She awakes to cast loving eyes on the sailor.
Frozen for a moment,
then realizes love will never destroy,
Peter returns to her side.

Copyright © eggflipper ... [ 2006-03-06 19:41:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Still She Sleeps (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 09:31:49 PM AEST
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pure and honest.

Re: Still She Sleeps (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 12:26:40 AM AEST
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Intriguing! Excellent styling, and a well-told message. Keep it up.

Andrew

Re: Still She Sleeps (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 06:12:23 PM AEST
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Sad and honest, confessional in parts. Solid poetry with the most important feature included-Art.

Re: Still She Sleeps (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:43:32 PM AEST
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this was a very captivating write.

i thoroughly enjoyed it.

wiz

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