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[aid] => mick
[title] => Feelings of Happiness/Moral Anguish
[time] => 2006-03-05 17:15:05
[hometext] => This is a poem I wrote that summarizes a date that i went on.
[bodytext] => We met on a site Wasn't sure where to begin Didn't think I had enough might Or courage within To talk to this guy Who I wanted so dear For him to be interested In my corky appeal I didn't want to seem too voracious I wanted to seem impressed I didn't want to seem uncurious Or even obsessed I decided I needed to meet him No matter how far the ride I knew it was a whim I just had to ask with pride So I asked if we could meet He replied with a "yes" He's so very sweet Yet still I started to stress He was way out of league I'd have to give my all I knew I'd catch fatigue If I wanted to enthrall The nerves went away I'd set myself straight I put myself at bay Until he approached the gate I looked into his eyes And I knew I'd screw things up As soon as he said hi I felt like such a schlup How could he like me? I was nothing next to him I needed to guarantee My personality wouldn't cave in The night was a blast I had so much fun The time passed fast I wasn't sure what was to come We watched t.v Silence came fast I felt like debris I sabotaged the night at last It was all my fault I let my shyness come through He'd never call And I couldn't start anew We kissed good night Then he closed the door I hoped the night was a delight And that he'll want to meet more So off I was On my 2 hour drive Thinking about my flaws Just trying to survive The excursion was extraordinary The guy, a total prize I hoped he felt the night was merry And that there'll be more tries. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Emolaw69 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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