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Array ( [sid] => 115862 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Nightmare [time] => 2006-03-05 01:59:03 [hometext] => The Nightmare [bodytext] => How could you do this
you love me
no more?
You left my heart
in pieces
shattered
on the floor

Tears in
my eyes
thoughts cross
my mind
All i want to do
is kill
some time

Blast up the music
lock my door
Grab my knife
blood drips
on the floor

I have no purpose
i hate
myself
You don't
love me
i wish i was
someone else

The room gets blurry
i can hardly see
Everything is
going black
what does
this mean

I hear a noise
the phone is ringing
I wake up
to realize
i was dreaming

I hear
your voice
you tell me
you love me
With tears
in my eyes
i thank God
you're still mine [comments] => 1 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 2 [informant] => snobunni [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Nightmare

Contributed by snobunni on Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 01:59:03 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

How could you do this
you love me
no more?
You left my heart
in pieces
shattered
on the floor

Tears in
my eyes
thoughts cross
my mind
All i want to do
is kill
some time

Blast up the music
lock my door
Grab my knife
blood drips
on the floor

I have no purpose
i hate
myself
You don't
love me
i wish i was
someone else

The room gets blurry
i can hardly see
Everything is
going black
what does
this mean

I hear a noise
the phone is ringing
I wake up
to realize
i was dreaming

I hear
your voice
you tell me
you love me
With tears
in my eyes
i thank God
you're still mine

Copyright © snobunni ... [ 2006-03-05 01:59:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by Nenny on Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 02:59:11 AM AEST
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sounds like a scary dream..glad it was just a dream and not real..but no one is worth killing yourself over..well let me take that back I would probably want to do the same thing if my boyfriend and I split up..great write!

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