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Falling down a hole so vast,
Being swallowed alive by yester years,
Being digested by tomorrow’s fears.

The further I go the more lost I become,
Deeper I venture into hells slum,
Coming ever closer to Satan himself,
Giving to him my virginity’s wealth.

Lost in the dark afraid and alone,
With only the reaper to pick at my bones,
Tormenting and teasing me with new horror,
Promising only a darker tomorrow.

Lower and lower my body does sink,
Now I wait at insanities brink,
My body is now his for the taking,
I will take the blunt of his torture and raping.

Sinking into the shadows of my past,
Living in fear or the curse that’s been cast,
Forever will I walk within no mans land,
With all but the devil to hold onto my hand.
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Sinking Into The Shadows

Contributed by pixie on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 11:48:18 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sinking into the shadows of my past,
Falling down a hole so vast,
Being swallowed alive by yester years,
Being digested by tomorrow’s fears.

The further I go the more lost I become,
Deeper I venture into hells slum,
Coming ever closer to Satan himself,
Giving to him my virginity’s wealth.

Lost in the dark afraid and alone,
With only the reaper to pick at my bones,
Tormenting and teasing me with new horror,
Promising only a darker tomorrow.

Lower and lower my body does sink,
Now I wait at insanities brink,
My body is now his for the taking,
I will take the blunt of his torture and raping.

Sinking into the shadows of my past,
Living in fear or the curse that’s been cast,
Forever will I walk within no mans land,
With all but the devil to hold onto my hand.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2006-03-04 11:48:18]
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Re: Sinking Into The Shadows (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 12:14:23 PM AEST
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another brilliantly written poem by pixie...your talent is so evident in everything you post..it's been a while since i've read much from you...you havn't been posting much lately have you?

Re: Sinking Into The Shadows (User Rating: 1 )
by Brasco on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 12:18:46 PM AEST
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Very descriptive and dark poem, I especially liked the last lines in the first verse:
Being swallowed alive by yester years,
Being digested by tomorrow’s fears.
I can defiantly relate to that. All in all I think it was well done and I enjoyed the rhyme.

Re: Sinking Into The Shadows (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 02:09:55 PM AEST
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Sinking into the shadows of my past,
Falling down a hole so vast

wow. beautiful write. i know exactly how you feel, its so scary.

Re: Sinking Into The Shadows (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 04:56:07 PM AEST
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I say Pixie girl your poetry is always so deep and emotional that i can't help but feel how your feeling.
Ever need to talk i am here.
hugs

Re: Sinking Into The Shadows (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 11:59:09 AM AEST
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Brillant. This was a very dark poem. I liked it alot. It was very very good. I like the way that you write your thoughts and how you express them it is amazing..

christina

Re: Sinking Into The Shadows (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 07:14:08 PM AEST
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Sadly beautiful flowing write

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