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Array ( [sid] => 115793 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Windows of the Soul [time] => 2006-03-03 21:34:21 [hometext] => the type of thing that makes sence only to me, sorta confusing, kinda like what life looks like from somebody else's eyes (aka windows of the soul)~comments please [bodytext] => Poison waters, lethal gasses,
Obscured deep within the eyes
Curtains framing windows of the soul
Enter at a heavy price

Avalanches cannot stamp out the fires
A sunset orange glows its flare
A tortured mind breaks down completely,
The faux silver lining of despair

Trapped between confusion only
To find out there is no cure
Let lightning guide the path ahead
Solitude cannot endure

Raging tempers of unfairness,
Making sense is overrated
Impostor feeling of forced bliss
Lying in the striking rain, sedated

Fight yourself, two conscious levels,
Right or wrong, you live or die,
Denial sucumbs, no one believes,
A deaf and mute, unheard goodbye

Angry to the point of bitter,
Satisfaction in the soul-deep scar
Nothing there to see but anguish,
Burning smoke of the cigar

Ignorant blind world, pregnant with naivete,
Blinded by the tumult future near
Not seeing the end is not so far away,
Slowly man reached the final frontier

Hurricanes the size of planets,
Their plan a cruel, savage devise,
And so is seen through windows of the soul,
Enter at a heavy price [comments] => 8 [counter] => 351 [topic] => 61 [informant] => drtylilsecret [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Windows of the Soul

Contributed by drtylilsecret on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:34:21 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Poison waters, lethal gasses,
Obscured deep within the eyes
Curtains framing windows of the soul
Enter at a heavy price

Avalanches cannot stamp out the fires
A sunset orange glows its flare
A tortured mind breaks down completely,
The faux silver lining of despair

Trapped between confusion only
To find out there is no cure
Let lightning guide the path ahead
Solitude cannot endure

Raging tempers of unfairness,
Making sense is overrated
Impostor feeling of forced bliss
Lying in the striking rain, sedated

Fight yourself, two conscious levels,
Right or wrong, you live or die,
Denial sucumbs, no one believes,
A deaf and mute, unheard goodbye

Angry to the point of bitter,
Satisfaction in the soul-deep scar
Nothing there to see but anguish,
Burning smoke of the cigar

Ignorant blind world, pregnant with naivete,
Blinded by the tumult future near
Not seeing the end is not so far away,
Slowly man reached the final frontier

Hurricanes the size of planets,
Their plan a cruel, savage devise,
And so is seen through windows of the soul,
Enter at a heavy price

Copyright © drtylilsecret ... [ 2006-03-03 21:34:21]
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Re: Windows of the Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 10:08:00 PM AEST
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Excellent write.So insightful.

Re: Windows of the Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by ginnginn11 on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 10:11:48 PM AEST
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very awzum...i love the desciption of everything its...wonderful! ;)

Re: Windows of the Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 10:12:08 PM AEST
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nice!!!! well written strong words and great emotions! --Fight yourself, two conscious levels,
Right or wrong, you live or die,
Denial sucumbs, no one believes,
A deaf and mute, unheard goodbye-- i love these lines! oh so true! A+++++ great job

Re: Windows of the Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 02:47:49 AM AEST
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Excellent write, each stanza could stand on its' own. Enjoyed reading this a lot. Peace and thanks for sharing. Laura

Re: Windows of the Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 10:42:56 AM AEST
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this is AWESOME! i really like it. i know you don't really need any more comments...but this just has awesome word choice...i love it!

- Bethani -

Re: Windows of the Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 03:37:24 PM AEST
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This poem showed a talant all through it that I have not read in a while, it kept its pace and rythem from begining to end, if only more writers could write with such ability. Please do keep it up.I am left wanyting more. very good indeed. Be well.

*H_S*

Re: Windows of the Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by hearts4pain on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 05:07:56 PM AEST
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this poem EFFING rocks. its just so *****in awesome.

seriously just soo much details. and so much litterary terms and just like omg so much meaning and anger and just very descriptive

i wish i could write half as well as you!

this poem rocks

love always! - Janine

Re: Windows of the Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 11:16:08 PM AEST
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EXCELLENT INNERVISION
*WOW*

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