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Array ( [sid] => 115786 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trapped, Tortured, and Insane [time] => 2006-03-03 19:51:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => trapped behind there walls again
no way to get out
no way to see the light

insanity controlling me as i search for a way out
of his horrible place in which i reside
of life

flashbacks repeating in my head showing my misery
my past
my nightmare

searching for an object to stop this pain
this night mare
this life

finding nothing but padded walls trapping me
torturing me
caging me

sitting in this room
in this jacket
in this building

seeing these doctors shake their head with confusion on what to do with me
what shot to give me next
what way they can torture me with this time

hearing my parents fight about who's fault i am
about how i could end up like this
about how im such a mistake

feeling the needle go into my skin
the tears that rool down my face
the pain my life gives me

they leave now, leaving me with silence
with pain
with a needle

blood streaming down y arm as i slice my wrist with the needle
with anger
with pain

coldness swept over me leaving me motionless
painless
lifeless


hope u liked it!
sugarlips <3
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 36 [informant] => sugarlips [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Trapped, Tortured, and Insane

Contributed by sugarlips on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 07:51:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



trapped behind there walls again
no way to get out
no way to see the light

insanity controlling me as i search for a way out
of his horrible place in which i reside
of life

flashbacks repeating in my head showing my misery
my past
my nightmare

searching for an object to stop this pain
this night mare
this life

finding nothing but padded walls trapping me
torturing me
caging me

sitting in this room
in this jacket
in this building

seeing these doctors shake their head with confusion on what to do with me
what shot to give me next
what way they can torture me with this time

hearing my parents fight about who's fault i am
about how i could end up like this
about how im such a mistake

feeling the needle go into my skin
the tears that rool down my face
the pain my life gives me

they leave now, leaving me with silence
with pain
with a needle

blood streaming down y arm as i slice my wrist with the needle
with anger
with pain

coldness swept over me leaving me motionless
painless
lifeless


hope u liked it!
sugarlips <3




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Re: Trapped, Tortured, and Insane (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:27:33 PM AEST
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great job expressing feelings..however i hope this is not how you feel..don't give in and take your life keep living...it may not be the best at times...but life is so short just give it a try




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