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The Book of LIfe Part I
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 07:09:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Allow me to introduce myself
I am Lyscia the dark elf
Times here in my land are tough
Sometimes there is to eat not enough
War has ravaged our land
Seems the end is at hand
A warrior once said
Look not to the dead
But now I long for friends
Who too soon met their end
And family my heart does miss
Seems we are on the edge of an abyss
Is there a champion that can my country save?
Or are we all destined for the grave?
I am but a woman child small
Am I the one to revive us all?
These are the questions I must ask
Before trying to take on such a task
Can the weak find a heart brave?
And a whole nation save?
Or am I just a delusional fool?
Destined to fall by some obscure rule
Is there some miracle I can perform?
And end this terrible deadly storm
The answer is
Written
In
The
Book
Of
Life
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2006-03-03 07:09:13]
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Re: The Book of LIfe Part I
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 08:06:01 AM AEST
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Once again your poetry has touch the soul, I enjoyed the read. Now if it's a hero you seek, look no further then me, The Phantom. :)
The Phantom |
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Re: The Book of LIfe Part I
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:20:06 AM AEST
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This is profoundly touching. Yes dear friend, tmiracles happen all the time. and Saint Paul tells us that when he is weakest, he is strongest.
We just have to have faith. It is within all of us to do marvellous things. Courage!
KUDOS!
The answer is written in the book of life.
Blessings
Elizabeth Damdy |
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Re: The Book of LIfe Part I
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by BSteel on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:51:51 AM AEST
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wow on the poem but i'm not so sure everyhting's determiend in the book of life,
for I thnik parts we must write,
anyways even better than usual poem |
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Re: The Book of LIfe Part I
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by slogan on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:38:42 AM AEST
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| I really like reading your work... great job...jh |
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Re: The Book of LIfe Part I
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:46:07 PM AEST
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Our book of Life. We start with a clean page every day. We must look to our Creator to help us do what is needed to aid man and life daily. Shari, this is so beautifully poignant. We have good days and bad days, but they are OUR days, given and blessed by our Heavenly Father. May we all work at least one miracle in our lifetimes.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: The Book of LIfe Part I
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:55:23 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful Shari, thank you. We each must trust and with our prayers, He will see us through |
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Re: The Book of LIfe Part I
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:22:35 AM AEST
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| Can't wait for part III. Gereat write....Mike |
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Re: The Book of LIfe Part I
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:38:47 AM AEST
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Superb! A captivating story with a character cursed with a possible gift of being the heroic. Nothing more interesting than this idea. Most importantly you held us on the cliff here, and seeing the next part is something to look forward too.
EXCELLENT JOB!
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Re: The Book of LIfe Part I
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 01:53:51 AM AEST
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what an excellent beginning of a story .
I really like this |
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