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fade
Contributed by
Keila
on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 04:12:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Fade away, Fade today
i wont pay, not to stay
i fear the light but not the night
i help the theif and not the Knight
i will not go without a fight
a ring a ring
a chalange of me
to keep both and not lose both
a chalane of fate, what of fate
secret kept is a secret safe
i am the theif not the knight
i will not pay, and shall i stay
i will not fade away
Copyright ©
Keila
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2006-03-03 04:12:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: fade
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 05:52:54 AM AEST (User
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nice poem |
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Re: fade
(User Rating: 1 ) by thisismesodeal on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:25:56 AM AEST (User
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Great poem, you might want to add proper puncuation and capitalation. |
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Re: fade
(User Rating: 1 ) by slogan on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:40:01 AM AEST (User
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good job..jh |
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Re: fade
(User Rating: 1 ) by boobiepeach on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 12:05:48 PM AEST (User
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superb poem
i like this write
please keep them comming
peach |
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