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TRUE LOVE

Contributed by rugby_player on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 11:41:45 PM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove



The day we met
Its burned into my brain
Something so simple
As an E-mail away

My friends told me not to
That you would just be some guy
But i knew in my heart what i saw was you
So i went with the heart
We talked
And talked somemore
Suddenly i couldn't believe what was happening
I was falling in love with you and i never met you

To this day i can't beleive
I met my soul mate on the internet
And i know Right now your with someone
But i know we will end up together

What i feel for you is like nothing else on this world
Talking to you on the internet
Makes me feel i'm right next to you holding you in my arms




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Re: TRUE LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by twick on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 11:50:05 PM AEST
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Where to start, the sentiment is apprieciated because your words are true, but is doesn't really seem like a poem more a love letter. I think it could be written a lot better but don't give up, keep writing!


Re: TRUE LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 11:53:18 PM AEST
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i know how stupid i'm posting on my own poem..but i just wanted to say i know its not the best but this is the first thing i have even been able to write in like a year so i've been kinda out of it..i just had a really bad case of writters block i guess


Re: TRUE LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 02:39:34 AM AEST
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I find this poem to be a poem myself, I think it is genious. one thing though, just my opinion.. well, sure.. its lovely and nice to meet people and the net is a great way to be able to meet, to talk to people you would never have had the chance to do if not for the PC. and sure, you can grow to love people as you speak with them.. and you are right, its like they are right there with you.. close , right in the very room you are with them.

these two lines I point out for a reason.

And i know Right now your with someone
But i know we will end up together

single or married, the person you speak with, make sure each do not lead either on.. if the other person already has a relationship, and another person comes along, interferes.. even if both share a kind of love.. just know that most often. even if you ended up together.. 2 lives may not be happy because of how it happened.. be the case.. if it does occur.. 9 times out of 10, you probably would not stay together long.. because of the circumstances you met under.. hard to explain, just do not get hurt or hurt someone elses relationship just because the both of you share deep affection. You may end up together, you may not.. pray on this very well.. explain to each other how you both feel, and be wise together knowing what the consequences of being together off the net and into each others physical arms may be, or end up.. take care.. and be wise and careful..safe. Even with email, web cam, voice, just be really careful.. for even if you do feel in love, or some type of feeling, closeness. just be careful. They are strangers actually.. sorry I wrote so much, I guess I care for your safety and your heart.. do not want you to get hurt.. really think this over, the both of you.. anyway, nice write.. it is a poem.. a poem in the form of a letter type.. story.. and it does give out a message.. and I am sure a lot of people either made good choices with their net friends, or their lives went sour.. painfully hurting once no longer in contact with them..

hugs, raqueLeah


Re: TRUE LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 08:59:19 PM AEST
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What i feel for you is like nothing else on this world
Talking to you on the internet
Makes me feel i'm right next to you holding you in my arms-- im happy you;ve found happiness. grab hold and never let go! its good to see you again its been a long time! A++++


Re: TRUE LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 03:12:43 PM AEST
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you may not want to get too attached... these things usually don't work out (i know from experience)... it's a very emotional poem though.

constructive critique... sorry
Jenny


Re: TRUE LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by big_B on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 07:05:38 PM AEST
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ive been looking for the same thing forever but i can never find it. good job


Re: TRUE LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by FlowerGrl on Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 02:13:45 AM AEST
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:) I think it's beautiful, and true. I feel the same way about someone I met online.




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