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Array ( [sid] => 11572 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Believing [time] => 2003-01-29 11:00:00 [hometext] => onfusing little poem i have no idea what its about. about alot of things.... so not sure.... heh-heh... [bodytext] => I need to get myself a destination.
There’s something I want to discover.
Maybe a new reaction,
One way or another.

Only dreams can have a way to make me win,
And maybe sometime, all my pain will one day end.
Wasting time in a young girl’s heart,
Pull me away, and let me go.

So I don’t show affection.
big deal,
get over it.
you make me feel,
like you don’t care for it.

In this barrier I stay,
This little box I wait.
Redemption in my soul,
I need to take control.

Awaiting my paradise in a pool of blood.
Alone in my dark cold chamber.
A new life, a wandering flood,
What is it like not to remember?

In the midst of the night, as the stars grew bright,
I cleared my mind, and looked out that night.
The moon was dull, and grey but silver,
Once in my long life of days, I was too a believer.

Not of god, or the devil, but of the other world,
Where there were vampires, witches, and goblins, skies that twirled.
But that was when if was a mere child, that believe in anything.
It was an illusion in my eyes; it was an early morning in spring.
There in front of me, I watched and stared.

From within my hand I held,
A silver little blade of beauty.
In my other I held pills to swallow, my time was dealt.
And my life is of cruelty.


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Believing

Contributed by frozensuicide on Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I need to get myself a destination.
There’s something I want to discover.
Maybe a new reaction,
One way or another.

Only dreams can have a way to make me win,
And maybe sometime, all my pain will one day end.
Wasting time in a young girl’s heart,
Pull me away, and let me go.

So I don’t show affection.
big deal,
get over it.
you make me feel,
like you don’t care for it.

In this barrier I stay,
This little box I wait.
Redemption in my soul,
I need to take control.

Awaiting my paradise in a pool of blood.
Alone in my dark cold chamber.
A new life, a wandering flood,
What is it like not to remember?

In the midst of the night, as the stars grew bright,
I cleared my mind, and looked out that night.
The moon was dull, and grey but silver,
Once in my long life of days, I was too a believer.

Not of god, or the devil, but of the other world,
Where there were vampires, witches, and goblins, skies that twirled.
But that was when if was a mere child, that believe in anything.
It was an illusion in my eyes; it was an early morning in spring.
There in front of me, I watched and stared.

From within my hand I held,
A silver little blade of beauty.
In my other I held pills to swallow, my time was dealt.
And my life is of cruelty.






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Re: Believing (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 01:31:16 PM AEST
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So much pain in this write,I hope things are better for you now! christina


Re: Believing (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 10:44:31 PM AEST
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Wow very creative loved this took my breath away. Wow keep these up Liz.

Bobo (Joel)




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