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Array ( [sid] => 115706 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cost of Vanity [time] => 2006-03-02 15:47:28 [hometext] => Sorry it's a little long [bodytext] => Lonely the prince, lost without hope
Timeless the tale of his sorrow
Many women sighed, would fall at his feet
If he would propose tomorrow

But he wanted no ordinary girl
Was waiting for one beyond compare
One that had jewels for eyes
And the stars radiance in her hair

He was such he would not settle
For even Princesses and Queens
Were not beautiful or stately enough
To by his side be seen

He wanted a most magnificent wife
One that no other had ever known
What he did not realize
Is the seed his vanity had sown

A sorceror decided to teach
This poor prince a lesson strong
He took a lizard from near the pond
And decided before long

This prince would see how foolish
His waiting and wanting could be
The sorcerer took unicorn horn
And shell from abalone

Sprinkled stardust and gold
Then added ruby for the lips
And sapphires to enhance her eyes
Then stirred with wind to sway her hips

When he was through
She was a beauty most extraordinaire
Blue eyes and red, red lips
Golden star dusted hair

He dressed her in silks and satin
Jewels adorned her locks
The prince fell at her feet
He really was in shock

Never had such beauty
Roamed this planet thus far
The sorcerer laughed to himself
Most of her came from a jar

The prince struck speechless
Married her that very day
He stood so very proud
Did not want her to get away

He took her on a honeymoon
To a lovely castle by the lake
He swept her off her feet
And laid her on the bed
Deciding a kiss to take

But the moment his lips met hers
A lizard she became once more
Locked forever in this sight
The prince ran out the door

They say you can still hear him
Roaming the sandy shores
Screaming to eternity
His loneliness now forever more


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Cost of Vanity

Contributed by NoSaint on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 03:47:28 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Lonely the prince, lost without hope
Timeless the tale of his sorrow
Many women sighed, would fall at his feet
If he would propose tomorrow

But he wanted no ordinary girl
Was waiting for one beyond compare
One that had jewels for eyes
And the stars radiance in her hair

He was such he would not settle
For even Princesses and Queens
Were not beautiful or stately enough
To by his side be seen

He wanted a most magnificent wife
One that no other had ever known
What he did not realize
Is the seed his vanity had sown

A sorceror decided to teach
This poor prince a lesson strong
He took a lizard from near the pond
And decided before long

This prince would see how foolish
His waiting and wanting could be
The sorcerer took unicorn horn
And shell from abalone

Sprinkled stardust and gold
Then added ruby for the lips
And sapphires to enhance her eyes
Then stirred with wind to sway her hips

When he was through
She was a beauty most extraordinaire
Blue eyes and red, red lips
Golden star dusted hair

He dressed her in silks and satin
Jewels adorned her locks
The prince fell at her feet
He really was in shock

Never had such beauty
Roamed this planet thus far
The sorcerer laughed to himself
Most of her came from a jar

The prince struck speechless
Married her that very day
He stood so very proud
Did not want her to get away

He took her on a honeymoon
To a lovely castle by the lake
He swept her off her feet
And laid her on the bed
Deciding a kiss to take

But the moment his lips met hers
A lizard she became once more
Locked forever in this sight
The prince ran out the door

They say you can still hear him
Roaming the sandy shores
Screaming to eternity
His loneliness now forever more






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Re: Cost of Vanity (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 04:10:02 PM AEST
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Very well done, I really enjoyed this piece, it's like my fav of yours now, a lesson to be learned from this, thanks for the read.

The Phantom


Re: Cost of Vanity (User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 06:26:08 PM AEST
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A wonderfully ambitious tale. It flows through my mind I read it a second time. No flaws were seen wonderful its been to read a tale that's yours.


Re: Cost of Vanity (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 07:26:46 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this tale.Excellent


Re: Cost of Vanity (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 07:47:09 PM AEST
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Ohhhhh girl. This reminded me of someone ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!

Ok mmmm back to the poem. This was awesome!!!! A wonderful write my friend. It flowed and took me into the story.

Michelle


Re: Cost of Vanity (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 01:14:32 AM AEST
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Hi NS. long or short your poems are always a hunger to read. lovely work ty rL


Re: Cost of Vanity (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:50:50 AM AEST
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WOW! A twist on the frog prince story. This one, however more a moral about vanity. Absolutely well written. Something that should be in a book. A fable that ends perfect. A very well done write here. I am encouraged with you, in each work more and more. Very enjoyable!

BRAVO!


- SCM


Re: Cost of Vanity (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:34:59 AM AEST
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Awesome story. You always leave me wanting to read more my friend.....Mike




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