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[aid] => mick
[title] => Cut
[time] => 2006-03-02 14:50:21
[hometext] => Have comments on how I can make my poem better? Tell me!!
[bodytext] => Cut As I lay me down to sleep I think of you and start to weep I take the knife and start to look Since the first cut I have been hooked The blood drips down on my bed I wished right then that I'd be dead My eyes then fill up with tears All these years were nightmares I hate this world it is so cruel All this time I was the fool I let you take over me Why oh why couldn't you let me be I thought that I was one of a kind Until you took over me and my mind A lot of people know who you are You made that boy drink and crash his car You put me down to the lowest level We all know that you're the devil That night in bed as I laid All I did was pray and pray God forgave me and I knew it was true You are so selfish and no one deserves you I may have cut more than seven But God promised me a place in Heaven [comments] => 4 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 36 [informant] => LiFe_oF_a_SuIcIdAl [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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